Yall Nigga's Act Like Yall Doctors, All Dis Choppin And Cuttin//
Well Call Me The Dermatolgist Cuz I'm Fuckin Up The Skin You In//
If It Wasnt For Adam And Eve, This Catastrophe Would Be The Original Sin//
Then Slice Your Pectoral Fins, Theefore My Lyrical Genes Will Conjoin You Like Identical Twins//

^^ Decent opener...but whats with the font?

whats wit all these littleboyz in the world today
they cant spit wit da illist men who spit what they spit and say what they say
Final finale cant hold a candle to me... betta watch what he sayin to me
cause ill smack a little boy so hard he cant see

^^^ this doesn't seem like a battle verse...how is it hittin him?


Um..my vote goes to Finale...but, both need to elevate on the metas, wordplay, and punches

Vote: Finale...better punches and structure...better more complex verse

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