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Boaty | 3 | 37.50% | |
Will S.Unyu | 5 | 62.50% | |
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05-24-04, 05:06 PM | #31 | |
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boaty yours was alrite...had good punch lines...made sense but will had much funnier lines....i liked his better...so my vote goes to will
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05-25-04, 11:14 AM | #32 | |
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Dam, anotha DQ. Uppin.................................
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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05-26-04, 11:29 AM | #33 | |
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Uppin............................................. ....
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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05-29-04, 09:30 AM | #34 | |
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IP: 9F70 3159
Dam this is going on way too long.....................
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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05-30-04, 10:19 AM | #35 | |
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IP: 4B60 5119
Lets Get Some Votes...................................
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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05-30-04, 10:36 AM | #36 | |
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IP: 2F05 D129
BoAtY
Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Overall 24/40 Will S.Unyu Flow 7/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Overall 25/40 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-31-04, 01:41 PM | #37 | |
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Vote.............................................. ....
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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05-31-04, 02:39 PM | #38 |
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IP: 4289 77F4
boaty - u had alot of stretched lines and that fucked up ur flow....punches werent even okay....bad verse....no wordplay....basic lines....elevate ya game....use better and more compelx meta's....egt ur personals up.....bad verse
will - killed his verse....u had complex rhymes....better meta's and punches....easily took this....much better wordplay....and ur flow was better....everything was better....easy win... vote - will
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06-01-04, 10:14 AM | #39 | |
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Dam, that wasnt even contstructive.lol. dude straight dissed me
Uppin this shit
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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06-04-04, 12:11 AM | #40 | ||
Power Hungry
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uppin
for some votes ............. ........ .
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06-06-04, 01:08 AM | #41 | ||
Power Hungry
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I dont see how this kid got any votes at all
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06-06-04, 01:41 AM | #42 | |
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Its your first battle dog, how do you feel?
Ill have you cryin like K-Ci and JoJo, "TELL ME ITS REAL!" lol, good opener, made me laugh Battlin you is like talkin to a wall It wont say anything back cause its too scared to talk at all Decent punch, kinda stretched line Youre not worth a good spit, hell you aint worth my time Your rhymes aint shit and you dont seem to mind lol, funny I just noticed something, im rhymin on you first Dam youre a pussy, that makes rhymin on you even worse Not a great punch decent I suppose Alright now, ill end this so you can breathe again Now youre porbably like salt&peppa "whatta man!" I didn't like this closer, I dunno I think all in all though the verse flowed pretty decently and there were a few good punches, your wordplay was limited alot to similies though improving this to include metas and other word associations will make you alot nastier than you are now. With a verse likes yours,you should've have hoped I no-showed.. This Kid Sucks,No wonder he throw Low Blows............ Not a great opener, not a great punch You was wack from birth,Meaning you was born scarred.... So watch me Smash this Pussy,Like an Overweight Porn Star!... funny, but I think you could have worded it better for optimal effectiveness You wack as fuck....and your rhymes are NOT sick!. So fuck you,and that guy who was quick to hope on your dick. (toxic) I dunno, I think this could have been worded differently and been ill but as it is now it doesn't really connect- Boaty thinks he's urban..but doesnt know the meaning of a dollar So I'll smash his neck bone...just to prove he isnt Blue Collar* If you said "expose his neck bone"- that line would have been a sick punchline, as it is its decent So, this is the closer,this newbie just merked this oldie I guess I made Alliyah happy,because I just rocked the Boat-y Lmao, funny closer, This was dope.... I think that WillSunYu Closer was his most effective punchline, but I dont think the whole verse was as strong as Boaty's.. Boaty had more punches - thats the battle here.... Good Luck in the future both of you please return the favor.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356
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06-06-04, 01:42 AM | #43 | |
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tryin to get them votes huh....Dont vote for him becuz he voted for you..I murked him..he knows it and I know it..So dont vote for him becuz he voted for you
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06-06-04, 11:40 AM | #44 | |||
Power Hungry
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I dont see how this guy is getting any votes mybe because the people that voted for him are fuckin idiots. I will fuckin vote against you in your battle.
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06-06-04, 12:33 PM | #45 | |
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dam...easy killa. I thought it was a good battle...youd have like 20 votes right now if the dumbasses that voted for you didnt leave like 5 word explanations
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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0 Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0 Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1 Win #5 - $ik; 5-0 Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0 |
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