gotaass had decent lines, flow was a lil off, the ending was weak, and you had some nice personals, but the flow was a lil off. You gotta come with the harder punches, I said the personals were nice, but they played so Im not gonna give an example....cause there isnt one good enough to show...sry i mite be a lil hard on you.

k not by much, but the girl took this for the following better flow and vocabulary....therefore, making the verse more complex. you didnt have that many punchlines but these two were nice and prolly won you the battle, but please avoid like the only time you hard is watching men cause that is played out.....thanx....good battle...peace no hate....hope both are satisfied with what I said
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iight........................i had to get rid of those

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I Suck......shut Yo Gay Ass Up And Battle Me, Soft Ass Nigga...that Vote Is Gone...u Fuckin Idiot....dont Come In My Thread Dumbass

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okay this battle is and was already done wtf is it open again for and thanx for the vote

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i got 2 votes deleted...and that last one is gonna get deleted too

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ummm gotaasswhoopin4U u came weak on diz battle, i hav seen betta from u b4

Flow-gotaasswhoopin4U u flow was wack, u had some good ideas in their but u were missin like multies and bunch of other good stuff. Lady came the whole time nice flow their was a couple of places where u slipped up but it was fine

Punches- gotaasswhoopin4U u had some weak punches, really need work here, Lady nice punches...

Orlignality and Complexity-gotaasswhoopin4U ur still like a newb, u r betta then dat, elevate dawg, lady strong as ever

Overall-Ladylyrical took diz battle wit ease, if gotaasswhoopin4U had brought it would've been a way better battle.

Vote LadyLyrical

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iight im gonna have to say lady won this battle she just beat ass in all places in this battle...she just came wit better though into the battle i bet ass really did not know wat to do yet...so all im gonna say is think ya shit out before u write it down ya lines could have been nice if u would have thought them out more....

Vote-Lady

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Lady = 32/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

Got = 31/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

uppin......................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^6666666666

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aight im votin for gotaasswhoopin4U. the verse was better, flow was on lock, and the rhyme was off the chains so imma give this one to you brotha. i think punches where a tie in this battle. no hate lady, good battle girl. but this one goes to gotaasswhoopin4U, good job dawg.

NEED VOTES BELOW PLEASE.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127213

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Aiight it lays out like this
Gotta you had some sidewinder punches (yeast one) they hit but could've glanced off. Werk on dat. No personnals that were worth menchinin ya flow was off but ya structure was ok. Punches overall were mediocre

Lady ya hd more Personnals (dat shit wins battles). Ya had flow but it got choppy at parts, and Structure was good. A little bit of a rhymeing problem (that shit loses battles). Overall punches were good.

Vote Lady lyrical

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