aight uppin for votes i had 5 and this won but canopy had tha votes deleted so uppin yall

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MAFIOSO FA LIFE

GRAVEYARD=
OUTSIDER KO
CANOPY

K,I don't give a shit what any1 of these cats say both ya'll have what it takes to be good textcees;
canopy you gotta try n stretch ya idea's out n be a little more creative with ya words/
ya have good idea's but just don't build them right.
punches/both
flow/vip
multis/canopy
creativity/none
vocab/vip
overall/vip
vip the only reason you won this was cause canopy's flow was a bit weaker than yours
and ya played out your ideas better ,this was actually a close battle/you both should check out the/tutorials/for more info(this is what i had to do n nobody cared enough to tell me so im tellin you) v/vip

It was onesided V.I.P gets my vote great flow good structure and an ok flow


uppin for votes look belowV

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me vs V.I.P

Both of you did ya think. Still need some work. Both of ya could be better. Lyrically i'm gun have to gow with Canopy. He just had better rhymes.

Vote=v.i.p.

He Had A Overall Better Verse.he Had Better Punches & Flow.canopy Had Ok Punches,but He Didn't Really Have Punches.good Battle.
Hit Da Battle Up\/

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