it was ok, u need to make ur lines longer tho so they can have a good srtucture.

if u anit wit us heres a presnent for u :
killza

yo busta, get battle

ya gettin paid to keep ya mind on ya flow/
im drunk as fuck all over ya hoe/
security dont wanna let me in the door/
cuz they know ill light a blunt on the floor/
niggaz mad my team ridin in bows/
flippin them bricks probably fukin ya hoe thats how the game go/
me and my niggaz come through deep in this bitch/
cadillac escalades off the gucci prints/
dont need no prints when we bustin hollow tips/
hit yo ass like denzel got hit by them russians/
leave yo ass wit concussions/
tell yo bitch that im comin/
watch my dick cuz she sikenin keep trak cuz u know that im thuggin/
i dont love these bitches but im married to the cheese so it come in trenches/
snitches get done in ditches/
and my niggaz come through hittin fences/
dippin from the marks cuz u aint got no heart/
and u afraid of my block u little mark.........

ur in unforunate

um busta here is the presidents words: "you are definally weak no doubt but i think you can do better so i'ma aloow you to stay in."1 oh and you presidents adviser

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i agree with mjust you in son un whatever it is. your head of defence

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ayo we the twisted government and that your position in it. you take care of anyone we got beef with. ok uppin for members we got 4 members need four more lets get it popping

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Im lookin for a crew....but i havent dropped any really heavy shit yet but check my verse out against Cythis and see if its up to par and a couple other battles
Ill drop ya sumthin i wroke when i was like 14 now im 19......

I found the power cord to my honda accord
Just seen my landlord i cant stand anymore
Followed em to the grocery store
Pretended to buy sumthin i couldnt afford
Followed em out the door to his 4 by 4 ford
Hit em wit a 2 by 4 board
Tied em up wit an extension cord
Then chopped em in half wit a DULL SAMURAI SWORD

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Johnny Riva AKA Get Familya :

R.I.P. P Cradle To the Grave

i no people rap diggerent in tryouts, gimme a battle link

Straight GoodZ

when S-DUBZ is behind ya...yo gotta kno aint nobody wiining yet...
illest nigga there is, u can call me the affiliate...
put niggas aside thats irrelavent
cut them up anyways, jus fa the hell of it
me rippin' a punk nigga...only for they benifit
cuz ima let em realize that they rhymes is tragic...
they killin' themselves..kinda like the orlando magic
im causin' straight havoc
haters got beef?...i could surpass it
so ima definite top of the line playa...
mos def,im on the most wanted radar...
why?
cuz im terrorizin' niggas like i was tryin' out fo' el qiada

Holla BAK

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If ya aint got nuthin' good to say...DON'T SAY NUTHIN

^^ i'll battle u u beat me u get in this crew u down

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aight...u want me ta start...

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If ya aint got nuthin' good to say...DON'T SAY NUTHIN

s-dubz, dat was good, ur in, a.k.a is gonna tell u wat u r, but ur in, good job

go to frontlines and set it up first 10 lines verses due 20 mins after check in

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