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Limited Edition 4 44.44%
shadow 5 55.56%
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Old 07-23-04, 01:44 PM   #31
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LE had alot better flow wit alot better vocab.
Whats wit the center an gay font color's....both of u...
thats dumb.
shadow was kinda wack.
he shit was way basic....seem'd like a 4 yrold's poem about how they wanna live life.
It was like the whole thoughts of the piece were given.
^^thats not supposed to happen.

Le created good imagery....Vote/LE
center font an color's R gay-1
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Old 07-23-04, 02:29 PM   #32
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I gotta give shadow this win...i think his topical came over mroe stronger then l.i..did...i think..L.I...shit was rreally good but..I do think it was good enough ..shadow used some really complexed..words..and..and i think he stayed strong over the whole topical..L.I...u used some really good wordplay...and used some strong words..but it kinda started off weak..and half way through..it started..become really strong but i think u needed to just word ur line a little diffrent and it would have won this battle..iight..nice drop both
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Old 07-26-04, 07:34 PM   #33
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nice verse both of you............limited nice piece ok vocab and lines...........Shadows was good....nice vocab and yours was more consistent on the topic id say than his was.........................close battle but ill say Shadow srry


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Old 07-27-04, 02:12 PM   #34
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Im Just Gonna Have To Say Limited...
He Went Off A LITTLE...
But His Flow And Content Kept Me More Involved...
I Mean, Its One Thing To Read...
But To Actively Fallow Is Something You've Really Got To Achieve...
I'm Gonna Go With Limted...
Vote: Limited...
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Old 08-09-04, 11:04 PM   #35
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i'm gonna go wit shadow on this he really did good in this his vocab was on lock same wit structure witch made tha flow good stayed on topic pretty well coulda done betta in the imaginary department but its all good limited u did good to but i was just feelin shadow more good battle though to both of you
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Old 08-09-04, 11:32 PM   #36
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man...dis was like the most tuff battle i ever had to vote on...also the closest...

shadow: yo, u wrote exactly wut iz in da bibble...n dats wut made it good... ur flow was also pretty good also... but wut made it hott was dat i could feel wut ur writtin n tryin ta say, like i could relate to ur verse alot.........

L.I.: damn dawg, ur verse was good also, i really felt wut u wrote cuz i think of the exact same thing, i could relate to ur verse...props to u..

spit: tie
flow: L.I.
vocab: Shadow
multi: shadow
thought into it: L.I.
Relate to it: tie
More on Topic: Shadow

vote: shadow

yo, dis is the best topical battle i've ever seen...props to both of ya... i'd like to see a re - match of dis!!!
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Old 08-09-04, 11:33 PM   #37
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man....i can't vote cuz i ain't registered.... i'll get registerd
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Old 08-10-04, 03:30 AM   #38
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1st nice drops by both...
in all honesty i was feeling shadows verse mor it got me thinkin n feeling the topic more so than le's did...it seemed like there was more put into this from shadow,both did well n kept on topic but shadows had more content n i felt like reading it 3 times...le nice drop 2 but i think you lacked in vision n imagery ,it jus seemed like you dint have the content that the other verse showed.....
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