uppin for some more votes becuase orijional had to be a bitch and tell an admin to take away my votes becuae they werent explained

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Lethal a.k.a. Mag...'s Drop:

first bar your hung out to dry,like jesus bitch i crucify...
place you in the public eye with raps like that they'd turn a blind eye...
it was a nice opener! 7/10
i'm shining bright with lyrics thats fluorescent,bitch is dull hire a cosmetic...
touch up them lyrics shits pathetic you aint a battler just more poetic...
I think you should of switched the position of both lines I would of been better in my opinion! 7.5/10
my shits leaving Orijional parasympathetic 'n' dont think i'll be sympathetic...
i'll diss 'n' rip ya like a surfer rips tides then up 'n' leave fuck being apologetic..
nice punch really feeling it 7.5/10
it's the way my brain ticks that says unload these clips fill em with lead..
so much i could flip this inbred 'n' write my next track with his head...
hahah that was some ill wordplay with the "lead" and shit haha best punch in the drop yet 9/10
with lyrics so sick i'll leave u malcontent as i beat you with circumvent...
thats my intent i torment mc's so much they need there parents consent...
nice punch not your best in the drop but aight 6.5/10
like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts...
so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz...
pretty nice punch here lol 7/10
as i upset 'n' leave you like a epeleptic so once u read this you'll throw a fit...
cas i straight up beat you "orginal" so write that in your life's diary bitch....
aight good closer....7/10

overall: 8/10 (gave extra cuz your flow was neva off)


Orijinal' Drop:

MAG is battlin newbies so he can get his record up/
Ya game is ass, is like Charlotte Bobcats startin' lineup/
pretty good opener feelin it! 7/10
You think you MAGnificent just because you got 10 wins/
Ya rhymes ain't authentic, is like a flower logo on timbs/
haha pretty good 7/10
Let me put the MAGnum toward ya forehead and cock it back/
U gonna get zero listeners, like William Hung's soundtrack/
ya hung is ass!!!!!!!!!!! 7/10
U say "the champ is here!", but U meant "the chump is here!"/
Right now, U Toni Braxton N I'm Bobby, I tore Ur whole fuckin career/
nope not liking but it decent 6/10
Let me knock U out like Tarver did 2 Jones, start da action/
I'll beat U down, U'll have mo' surgeries than Micahel Jackson/
haha but I have to say this is unoriginal michael lines
are used more times than his plastic surgeons scalpel lol 6.5/10
Right now, I'm MAGnificent and gonna take ya whole spot/
My M16s will make covered in spots, than a hoe thru cumshots/
haha nice one orijinal 7.5/10
So from now on, dont be cocky thinkin U all bomb/
Cuz son, you nuttin' but a joke like 'Chappelle's Show' sitcom/
pretty good 7/10

overall: 7.3/10 (gave extra for good flow)

vote: Lethal

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