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*The~Star* 1 16.67%
Durmil 5 83.33%
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Old 07-11-04, 05:04 PM   #31
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This makes no damn sense

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Old 07-11-04, 08:42 PM   #32
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Durmil- your verse was good........You beat her on punches......ya structure was kinda stretched.........flow wasnt that good becuz ya structure was stretched

Star- your verse was good too.......it just lacked the punches that Durmil had.your structure was kinda stretched too.
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Old 07-11-04, 09:03 PM   #33
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^I won in punches,u just don't see

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Old 07-11-04, 10:28 PM   #34
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honestly ur punches were mediocre at best....why do u think ur the shit?

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Old 07-12-04, 10:18 AM   #35
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^Fuck U

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Old 07-12-04, 07:02 PM   #36
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MULTIS: - no real multies i could see..
FLOW: - star
PUNCHES: both
PERSONALS: Durmil
WORDPLAY: Durmil
CREATIVITLY: Durmil
OVERALL: very close.. but durmil had a few funny lines..

v/ durmil

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Old 07-12-04, 07:03 PM   #37
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck.... cant vote on the poll... oh well.. lol.. guess mine was just an opinion
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Old 07-12-04, 07:52 PM   #38
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Old 07-13-04, 07:03 PM   #39
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Battle been a whole week and we have two votes.Come on people.Wake-up.


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Old 07-14-04, 12:53 AM   #40
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MULTISurmil, i didnt see any from star
FLOW:ehhh...tie, both had stretched lines
PUNCHESurmil by a mile, he came wit more creative ones in his verse, while star was lackin, and the only real good one was the one about her period, but them shits is played
PERSONALSurmil, star had none
WORDPLAYurmil, the closer was ill along wit other parts of ur verse
CREATIVITLYurmil, already been stated...he took played lines, and added something extra to them which made them better
OVERALLurmil, he had better punches, personal, he had multis, creatvity, took this with ease.
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Old 07-14-04, 01:00 AM   #41
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Thanx for the votes......

keep em comin 2-1 uppin.....
 
Old 07-14-04, 02:54 PM   #42
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I AINT GONNA BRAKE DOWN DERMILS VERSE,THERE WERE SOME DECENT PUNCHES IN THERE,CHEAP TELESCOPE,THE CLASS SICK LINE...DECENT DROP....

STAR,WTF WAS THAT FONT? GAY.......U CAN BARELY READ IT

Weak link, surprised you 5 and 0, spit ya best against me, still don’t reach my level
Need to get your crew, so y’all can dig a hole, to reach yo level of the devil

GAY

Sneak up on you with my skill, caught you off guard as if you discovered you had Sars
My words leave you with scars so bad, that you wish you could disappear to Mars
OMFG GAYER
You think you spiting fire, but you mistaken, betta stop drinking that hot sauce
But don’t call me a liar, when I leave you shaken, from what? I think this loss
OMG THIS AINT EVEN A PUNCH

Don’t underestimate, cuz I’m a female, I’ll leave you stupid like a dog chasing his tail
I’m the hammer, you the nail, Cuz I’m beating you in, leaving ya face pale
BEATING/HAMMER/NAIL...THATS SO FUCKIN OLD...N WACK

Wouldn’t believe what you was reading, maybe thought it was stole
But my incredible flow, flows smooth, like the blood from my hole
YUK........N I'VE ALREADY USED A FLOW/MESTRUATION LINE THAT WAS WAY BETTER,THIS WAS JUST GROSS N WACK

Defeat is coming for you, cuz Its murder you wrote, I’m just giving you a warning
I know its tough for you, so let me put it in quotes, “gather yo crew to start the mourning”


OH GOD.....SERIOUSLY,STAR U'RE WACK....NOONE SPITS ABOUT THE DEVIL N MARS N GARBAGE........UR ENTIRE VERSE WAS WACK,U DIDNT HAVE A SINGLE GOOD LINE.....N THAT FONT? U REALLY THINK THATS GOOD FOR BATTLING?
WOW...THIS WAS SO ONE SIDED...FIRST DUDE WON
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Old 07-14-04, 03:05 PM   #43
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You a joke, my lines will have ya dazed so go home and tell ur folk/
Now watch as I leave this *Star* out of sight like a cheap telescope//
THIS WAS A DECENT PUNCH...GOOD WAY TO USE UR OPPONENTS NAME AGAINST THEM
U gettin ya ass kicked, a 5-0 loss will leave ya behind like the past bitch/
u could sneeze during "4th period" and ya still wouldnt be "class-sick"//
THIS WAS OK....
Slut, you "blow more cock" then "chicken fuckers given oral-sex"/
Havin more "nuts goin down your throat" then "obese squirel-necks"//
HMMM....NOT FEELIN THIS
I'm bein' pretty honest though ya corny and also ya reps weak/
The only way this dull bitch gon "excel" is by makin "spread sheets"//
I'M PRETTY SURE I'VE HEARD THIS BEFORE.........PLAYED
I got rhymes for days, so ill keep hittin u wit heavyweight punches/
Ur a wannabe star, so ill leave ya straight lookin like a brady bunch kid//
WEAK
Goin toe to toe wit me bitch ur bitch your bound to regret this/
STL? no im leavin u a-lone *Star* like the whole state of Texas//
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UR FIRST 2 PUNCHES WON U THE BATTLE,CUZ THE STAR HAD NONE......
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Old 07-17-04, 12:39 AM   #44
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uppin this........

battle stands 3-1..........
 
Old 07-17-04, 08:21 AM   #45
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i cant really vote but damn durmil ripped her lol . he was off and on with illness like he'd spit a line then the next line was hott...nice shit...star ya shyt was rhyming but eh wasnt feeling the content.
 
 


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