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Strype- Punches Were Good, Flow Was Good, Structure Was On Point, Personals Were Good But Played, Stratigically Da Truth Was A Good Name Pick For Him Because Lines Like That Are Already Played..... Metaphors Were Decent.....Wordplay Was Ok... And Some Lines Were Original Others Were Not.... Overal Nice Verse....


DaTruth- Started Out Good, But The Dr. Sues Line Was Played In Anyway You Worded It lol, You Know That, Flow Was Good, Structure Was Ok.... Wordplay Was Ok, Personals Were Original.... And Punches Were Decent...

Punches- Strype
Personals- Da Truth
Flow- Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Tie
Metaphors- Strype
Structure- Strype
Originality- Da Truth

Good Battle...

Final Vote- Strype...

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yo im voting for Strype caz i liked the flow and good used of words and ryhmes

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SLaNGslang

i got to wait to vote but i will vote for Strype

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-Strype-
Acceptin my challenge was a mistake.. only Sparkin a Flame
but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name
this was ok

Herb's too busy Complainin' .. Claimin' his Wackness is Fake
Roll wit me.. hit the ground harder than'a Fat Bitch on Skates
haha made me laugh preety good

Poor kid dreams about beatin' me.. stuck in a Foolish Vision
When my punches'll bend ya farther over than Ja Rule in Prison
ha kinda funny as-well

You never explain your votes, but ya always Askin for Favors
and ya rap's cold as Ice Cream.. plus it's Lackin the Flavors
decent flow but could of re-wrod it better to have more effect..

Your style is awful.. couldn't beat me if I Handed you My Lines
so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times
good personal

now Grab a Clover cuz the Battle's Over.. this he Clearly Knows
Kid's bout to get filled wit more holes than a Bowl of Cheerios
ummm it flows but not that hard hitting....

I peeped your previous posts n' poems.. a Lot of em are Boring
Now watch the voters Trash your Verse like the Bottom of a 40
nah i wasnt feeling this...

but all around it was preety good nice flow a few good diss N punches...


Datruth29:

Yo flow is Pork Rine, I demolish Your Kind in Four Lines
Only reason yo record's 4-0's coz u battled the same spaz 4 times
ok

I spit acid, while you get dipped In It Like A Nacho
In any rap race i'll leave this nigga Winded Like Chicago
kinda weak..

I'll roast you faster than time it's self, make u "Live In The Past"
The only reason you got "Stypes" is coz i be "Whippin Yo Ass"
haha decent diss...

I'll Piss In A Glass and chase it with stricnine to Kill U
Even if u were decent, i'd cut my nerves so I won't "Feel U"
not bad i was feeling it

He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole
N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle
nah preety weak man ....

Behead His Type, between the lines I'll give u dem Redish "Strypes"
(Blood)
U lost coz U underestimated, u can't "sleep on me", like a Bed Of Spikes
decent not bad...

But as I said I'll continue to reign, slay u ass they All Watch ME
Take yo fuckin heart out like it was a part of an Autopsy....
not a bad ending......

this was a tight ass battle props to both but i think
Datruth29 took this battle
after re-reading it for having a few better diss/punches
tight battle thou...

haha.. nice.. there goes my KO tho by the votes, I should have been 7-0 before this last one was posted ^ oh well.. a damn hot battle regardless.. good shit truth, much respect..

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I'm so tired of lookin' at this battle every time I log on.. shit's been open for a year now.. could we get a vote or 2? Thanks!