trooper= ya verse was good man.........some of ya punches ive heard before....so work on that........umm ya structure was ok seein as though all of ya lines were almost the same length......but still you had a good verse

dv8= ya verse was ok........didnt come as hard as trooper did..your punches were ok but wasnt really hittin hard.......you did good with your use of multis but still i dont think that was good enough......

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