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07-28-04, 03:27 PM
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i never understand why ppl complain bout the length of the line, as long as the person keeps it an intergrul part of the story does it really matter.
anyways i like it, very easy to picture within the head an yah word play made it easy to follow an enjoy, very deep homie a good contender for open mic july. peace
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07-29-04, 10:03 AM
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Thanks Alot Everyone...
And The Line Shit Doest Piss Me Off When Everyone Complains... But Whatever, I'm Working On It... Upping... ~One~ |
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07-29-04, 12:28 PM
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lotta emotions.. very vcreative, liking the topic, ur structure is gettin better, just use the font of tahoma, that'll fix it, that was the oonly thing i didnt like, otherwise this was dope! 9.5/10
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07-29-04, 04:36 PM
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Wow...lmao this shit was wack as fuck
 just playing good shit lot of emotion nice vocab imagery shit very nice drop feeling it work on your struc though other than that good shit 
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08-05-04, 01:54 PM
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Upping This Shit...
Lol And Daym, Everyone Stealing My Ideas While Im Out... Suddenly Everyone Turns Their Topicals Into Open Mics... Real Original, ....One. |
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08-26-04, 05:00 PM
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Upping This...
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