Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
not bad, but nothing special either..
as far as i am concerned you have already beat
Spul...unless you go on a completely wack vengence

Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
no...doesnt really make sense, read it again..
didnt like this at all

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
ok... this was a little better, still nothing special

Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
decent personal, better punch here

Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
nope, too elementary..didnt like..it was played too

As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
nope...to simple..need a more complicated rhyme scheme
too elememtary....my nephew can rhyme these words..

& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
no..seemed forced..didnt like this either
you are going downhill

Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
not that bad...decent concept...it wasnt dope
but it was better than most of your other lines

moving on

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
this was the best punch of the match so far...thankyou
for throwin a punch that actually landed..

Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
didnt like the BOOM in the setup..took away from your
verse..the punch wasnt bad though...

Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
i really didnt get this one, might be some kinda personal
so i wont comment on this one

Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
no..forcin your persoanls...and by the way..links in your verse
is played as hell..they are not necessary, if you need a link
to use a personal, don t use them..i never click links
they take too much time...i wanna read the dam battle and be done
with it

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
this was aight i guess, nothing special..i did get the punche though
i still didnt think it was that dope

I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
no...didnt like the concept, never heard of flash bangin either
loss me there bro

That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
not a punch here, you are just statin the obvious
not really dissin him to me iunno. maybe i missed it again

This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
i saw this coming, the only thing worse than a played punch
is a predictable one...not a good closer


i have to say after reading your verse, you did have a few sparks
followed by some horrible lines...
it was about ten times better than Spul's verse because u actually
connected on a few of your punches..
nothing great though..keep droppin verses...dude, you'll get there

one more to go ..

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honestly no diss but all three of yall didnt not come hard like yall do in one on one battlles

spul...
good shit son you wanted this i could tell....
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A+
punches and metas A
intensity and personals A
overall A
like i said good shit,you was hungry

apoth..
diissapointed me the most...you know you didnt bring fire just heat
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A
punches and metas B+
personals and intensity C
overall B
you wasnt hungry lack of intensity brought it down

polifick...
good shit very impressive
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A+
punches and metas A-
personals and intensity A
overall A-
good shit ,you came a milimeter bettah than spul,


vote for Polifick

Please dont tell me you call THIS a breakdown..i will ask jpoll if it stands

-Superior

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BOSTON LYRICIST

^^^wtf

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Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
no this was horrific...doesnt make sense..sorry

Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
hmm...i will give you an ounce of credit here
even the concept is played as hell.. in other words it wasnt complete trash

Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
u lost points for sayn "Worster" that is not a word
if you find that word in the dictionary please show me..
even if you meant Worser..guess what thats not a word either
i stopped at the made up word by the way..so i have no idea
what the punch was, cus it really doesnt matter

Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
no..nuff said, i just didnt like it

Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left..
I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
first of all i dnt like the three line rhyme scheme..
some people can do it but you cant... sorry

Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
nope..lines were too stretched..didnt like the punch anyway

Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star
wtf was that, that was a sad closer man,jsut sad
too stretched..

Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
wordplay attempt failed

If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
nope...not much here either

Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
nope...i am gettin tired of this

Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
thats was bad man...not feelin this one either

Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
forced wordplay....didnt like this either

Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
nope...what is going on..this is a championship match remember

Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...


lets wrap this up..
sorry man , i wasnt feelin your verse too much either
your lines were stretched, too many links...thats -played and the
punched just didnt do it for me





ok all in all
this was not a good battle...
Spul spoiled it for everybody with the cum line
and the rest of his verse didnt make up for it..

Apo..was a little better which is why he gets my vote..
Poli wasnt good either

now go ahead, bitch and complain about my vote and my comments
but thats the only way you are going to get better, by
reading criticism...
anyway i will stop here....


V/Apothesis

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O Know, He's Back!

v) Apotheosis

he actually didn't come mad played like all the rest..

Spul - played

Pol - played

3-2-2 yeh?

^that can't possibly count as a vote. If it did than that lawless vote for me would count. Also, Boston Lyrcist's vote goes to me. Cuz he gave me and A overall, and Polifick an A-.

So I think it's 3-2-1. But I don't kno.

A- Is Better Than A

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nah, it goes A-, A, A+ <from lowest to highest

Spul

You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
Decent
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
Funny....
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
ok...
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
aight..But...
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
funny.....
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
Good
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
Decent
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
Not that Good...
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
lol ..Shit funny
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
decent closer

*After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick*

I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
hot...good personal
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
Not Feeling It...Either
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
Not really feeling either But decent
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
Decent Closiner

*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
LOL
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
umm GOod COmplexity....
Decent Drop and Pretty hott
overall:8.5/10

Apotheosis

Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
Lol
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
Decent
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
alright.....
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
decent
Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
haha
As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
decent
& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
Good
Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ANARCHITISTS's
Coo......

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
ok personal
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
Ha ha
Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
decent
Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
alright
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
Umm No
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
haha
That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
Lol decent
This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
coo



Pretty Good...

Overall:7.5

Polifick

Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
Umm..
Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
Dope....
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
Not feeling
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
Nice..
Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
Decent
Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...
Decent

Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
Nice good Wordplay and COmplex.....
If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
Decent
Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
ummm not feeling
Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
could of done better
Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
hahaha
Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
Nice Complex...Hard punch haha
Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
Decent
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...
coo...


Decent Drop

Overall=7/10

Close battle but

v/Spul Took it

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votes are

spul-3
po-1
apo-2

a couple of the votes didn't count...only the well explained votes counted...not bl's...willys...etc

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damn what yall want a novel and shit....what we need is an outline for voting that way all votes count and people cant bitch about nothin,d qin votes makes this whole match bullshit,cause that gives someone an advantage

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what we want is a fucking break down of the fuckin verses...you should know this...idiot...this is the fucking championship for fuck sakes...

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uppin'.. 3-2-1 me.