Voted For: Protell

this came harder i think then tha other nigga more lyrics and pun.

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Voted For: lil kid

this man japped nice punchlines good flow my goes to lilkid

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Voted For: lil kid

i leave this chump-dead, when we go and bump-headz,
only time u got '2 in da sheetz' iz when u sleep in 'bunk-beds'! (ova)
^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER AND PUNCH

i'll break-all-ya-spits u aint neva gonna be rippin-me,
peeps take-all-ya-shit.............cept ya virginity!,
//^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NICE MAYNE

even if u gave 'alchohol 2 ya verse' u still aint got 'drunk-rhymes',
you should stay in this forum...cuz you alwayz 'front-linez!'
^^^^^ PERSONAL & PUNCH NICE MAYNE

spit? u best-not, when u got 'heartburn' iz da only time ya 'chests-hot',
and u cudn't 'look high on da table' if u 'stared at ya desk-top!',
//^^^^^^^ HA NIC PUNCH MAYNE

when u ‘piss in ya pants’ iz da only time ya ‘flowins-tight’ (tight pants)
Ya must be ‘aimin ya punches left’…cuz dey ain’t goin-right! (damn)
// WAT! PUNCH KO DAMN IT

choker-RUN, you'll only eva have super soaker-gunz,
me facin hims lyk '3 minus 2'.............u know-it's-1!!!,
^^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHH WHAT

my rhymes are like 'ice cream vans at night' u 'know-it's-dope',
u alwayz 'raisin laughter'.............cuz u a 'growin-joke'! (K.O.)
^^^^^^^^ OK NICE CLOSA OVERALL 9/10

PROTELL

lol...with no "game" u cant get any word~"play" u fake jock...
this "lil kid" has pre~writtens..so im his "writers block".......
^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER

i'll quickly smak his tongue out his mouth...so he doesnt know wat victory tastes like...
then do uh "webscan" cuz u know he bites off other sites...
^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHHHH

throw this guy in tha slammer...he knows fake mc's are against tha law...
thats just 1 alias...tha other 1's lickin balls..
^^^^^^^^^ OK OK WHAT DA FUCK IS DAT

dude tryna "ride"~tha beat....while he know's "lil kids" cant "drive" automo~"bills"....
he couldnt "elevate" his "game" if he won "price"~is right" on tha biggest hill...(if u dont understand...ask me be4 u vote)
//^^^^^^^^ I UNDERSTAND NICE PUNCH HOMIE

this "lil kid" still doesnt listen 2 mom..."dont talk 2 "strain"gers..
or an "artery" will bust cuz im ur "danger"...(when u strain ur self 2 hard u could blow an artery)...
// AIGHT NICE


kill off this "kid" quick...he 2 "lil" 2 be in tha game...
i treat "herbs" tha same cuz there vunerable ta "flame"..
^^^^^^^^^ YO NICE CLOSA BUT AINT BETTA DAN LIL KID
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AIGHT DIS SHIT IS AN CLOSE ONE FO SHO,BUT LIL KID EDGE A LIL BIT WITH DA CLOSA DA PUNCHES WERE THROWIN HARD NICE DROP PEEPS// LIL KID CLOSA CAME BETTA DAN URS PROTELL//

NO BEEF RETURN AN FAV

~PEACE~

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Voted For: lil kid

lil kid -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Protell -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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