hey yo dis dun took me half an hour so not my full effort but hows this or do u want it in a different style? yo get at me on pm or sumin rabit or phoenix. what y'all wanna c in it or want changed yo.

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yo i think mc lyriclord is just lyriclord now. part from that man its dope as fuck.

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it looks good thanks G, but he only thing is mc lyriclord is now just lyriclord as prospectiv said ^^ but good sig. . . uppin for a few more try outs. . bout 4 more places available.

uppin for a few more try outs

come on ! keep tryin !

uppin for try outs still, come on people, dont sleep on this, we gonna get a crew forum started up as soon as we got 2 or 3 more members

uppin for try outs still, please stop sleepin on this crew

im stuck to tightness cuz dis shyt is still static/
and for da title of "main~fagget" yall rappers can "still~have it"/
u kids talk shyt but yall jus dont fukin kno/
yea im a pussy da way i get more ass den fat joe/
and ima be part of dis crew cuz i strait up define dopness/
they dont need none u faggets yall can remain hopless/

wutever theres a quick 6 lines holla at me in a pm if u like it...i will check dis forum from time to time to see if u liked it but if u wanna get me ur better off pmin me iight im out peace ~1~

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ok, i liked that verse, a nice freestyle, and you used some decent vocab, which some people don't do a lot of the time. you in. uppin for more try outs, 2 or 3 places left now.

yo... I'll be down only under one circumstance... If I can be mod & co-leader. holla at me.

will get back to ya on that one, am disgussin it with phoenix.

iight c'mon uppin for dis shit dont sleep on us...........

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zig zag you in, will make you a mod and co leader when the forums up. keep checkin into this thread. peace.

Word.