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Old 10-02-04, 08:05 PM   #31
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i say no to X-Spitty you got horrible stucture. i suggest changing it to so thing like this
.................................................. .................................................. ......//
.................................................. .................................................. ......//
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enter after everyline and but something there like dots or slashes
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Old 10-02-04, 08:12 PM   #32
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get another flow and come back basicly elevate
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Old 10-03-04, 12:44 AM   #33
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aight this is an easy one on both of em... no and no... both have wack structure... but phenom has potential... x-spitty is just wack... not to be mean but its the truth... sorry but no to both
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Old 10-03-04, 01:01 AM   #34
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i totally agree great leadership, i finally got a crew that got good leadership
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Old 10-03-04, 11:47 AM   #35
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tru dat 2 both of yall...claps for bigpapa....UPPIN DA TRYOUTS FOR DA SICKEST CREW IN DIS SHIT.......
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Old 10-03-04, 01:51 PM   #36
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ayo thanks guys... i apriciate that shit... uppin this shit for some tryouts yall!
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Old 10-03-04, 01:57 PM   #37
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uppin for tryouts peeps, we looking hot as a muthafucka, lol
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Old 10-03-04, 05:00 PM   #38
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yo free a's dont sleep on dis thread...we da fam...hookin up wit dis crew gives u protection from da rest of da niggaz on dis site..c'mon check out my sig for da roster...
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Old 10-04-04, 12:32 AM   #39
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uppin for tryouts.
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Old 10-05-04, 02:53 AM   #40
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uppin for tryouts...........................
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Old 10-05-04, 04:59 PM   #41
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gunz&drugz
gunz kill ppl so do i
hu gives a fuck if dey die
drug r da best thing out these days ppl take dem though lifes
also cuttin dicks heads with knifes
man its just life u live or u dont
fuck all the wankers hu wanna do suicide but wont

theres my try out

in/out?
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Old 10-05-04, 08:24 PM   #42
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fuck no....you out..but i dont get da final say big does...but damn dog...that gun drug shit is played to da fullest..your shit was whack anyways
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Old 10-06-04, 03:28 AM   #43
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well fuck u den
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Old 10-06-04, 04:50 PM   #44
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i agree with teck.... not no but HELL FUCKIN NO.... very played, bad structure... elevate big time... no hate tho... lol
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Old 10-08-04, 01:48 PM   #45
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yo can i be in this heres a tryout a battle i did aginst X-On

nickel you aint worth that much//
if u like his shit u smoked too much dutch//
his mama the only women he touched//
not saying he ugly but he sleep in a cage//
like an aminal this bitch got me in a rage//
u dont like violance talk//
well u gonna hate when i spit through my double gauge//
thats not yours//
thats a mobb deep phrase//
stop stealing verses and lines//
before i shoot u up multiple times//
and if ya ask him his jail record//
he say he been to jail 9 times//
but in all reality he commited 0 crimes//
if you sold your rhymes u'd get cash back//
shut up before i finish this and put u back on the rack//
even with a olypic champion he couldnt run on a track//
flows, punches, brains just some of the shit your stuff lack//
i won this battle and it aint a question its a fact//


and hese a battle i did aginst CeRtIfIeDtHuG

man fuck checkin in unless you wanna get ripped..
nodoby wanna see you, like a fat bitch gettin stripped..
just one slip of my tounge and ya throat is slit..
closest you get to a single is doin a skit..
call me a firespitta cause i come from hell..
no i aint a drug deala but im givin you this L..
pop ya ass faster than a bag of popcorn..
your useless.. like a roof with the top torn..
come here little homie, yea leave ya closet..
my gun will leave you drippin like a leaky faucet..
i put some sauce on it and stick a fork in ya yous done..
your punches have me laughin, leave me slappin my knee..
one jab from me? shit you gon' need the EMT..
call you a bird feeder cause i leave you hangin in a tree..

hit me up in a pm or in this thread bouth on your discition
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