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Old 11-09-04, 03:35 PM   #31
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10/10.flawless............
Keep Em Comin'
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-10-04, 03:52 PM   #32
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Dame that shit was dope as fuck,.. the best verse I have
read in a while. I liked the first few bars and I like the way
you expressed the enviroment you was in and the way you
body reacts...

Heart vibrating against the cage that im trapped in…
Sweat evapourate from the pours on my slack skin…

Had me hooked from the start man very nice verse.

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Old 11-10-04, 03:55 PM   #33
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thanx dawg

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Old 11-10-04, 04:29 PM   #34
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Dope OM Dawg....Good Use Of Vocab and good emotion and Depth...Especially even when the Line's were short...
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Old 11-10-04, 04:36 PM   #35
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We must have the sickest topical division on this site you
know.

haha

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Old 02-16-05, 05:08 PM   #36
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