This isnt a DR...... i think both of you are dope... so not a dr....
now i know that sexual lines are played but spul really must be gay
he's battling tha q, five source ceo with banks attempting a 3 way
No..... not a good one at all.....
kid seems to get attached to hookers who like to search for net dick
cause without a job, welfare, or $ going to the bank would be hectic
ok flow.....not good line....but decent
punches and bars r damaging ya perfect record, i'll leave spul aken
cause posing as banks in gay porn was how his virginity was taken
This was a very good line.. nice play on his name....and good flow
u even said it ya damn self "this fag gonna get it" then u cheered
why? cause u be forever getting spermed delivered in ya rear
wtf.. no this is not good... the last line in this bar shuda been better
i don't know why u even accepted this battle cause i slaughter foes
so u stand aside and tell ya bitch bend over cause i daughter hoz
This is a Self Glori... so no.. not good... "I Slughter Foes"=glorifying
kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details
about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female
LOL.... nice shit.... a very good lines nice personal
ain't no denying it, spul coversated with a boy named dicklicious
that really shows that spul like to grab on more men then sid vicious
fflow wasnt on target... and it wasnt that great
kid went and said i d/r banks, u tried to d/r me, oh u a fan of mine
spul tries his best to match my every single move like a pantomime
no.. this isnt a punch.... the first lines could've been better. but the other line killed it...
i just wish more peeps in this damn world would practice abstinece
do u see what happens when cher and prince mate, an accident
not direct......not a good bar
why u get mad on AIM, kid got hyped up over ducking accusations
spul wins?, better chance of arm amputees conducting masterbation
Ok Closer.. could've been worded a lil better

ummmm Scenario... tyhis wasnt your best verse.. i 've seen better from you... ovreall yours was pretty much good... excpet some of your bars start of with a lil self glorification... but it was good...also the fact that 1/4 of your verse was about banks... made it slightly less interestign and that gay banks crap is old.... i heard it from alot of other kids.... but the fact that you played it to a kid that loves G Uint made it slighty good and personal...... nice though....
Score: 7.5/10
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Jus like a "waitor" turned "editor"... I'll "serve" you the "news"
About how you called out SPuL, and then got... verbal abuse
i got what ya meant here... but i didint like how ya opener was started
cuz nigga, I will not lose, refuse, to float yo boat
... Don't even start to gloat, cuz like yo sig, you "need a vote"
weak as fuck... dumb line
Homo version of Banks, dress like him, his name you takin'
Must hate the nigka too, for the gay porn that you be makin'
lol..... kinda personal cos of his pic.. cos he does look like banks.. ok
Nigka you always fakin'... merkin' MC's for fun?
... Hell nah, fag, you be jerkin' inside their bun
damn... this was weak as hell...... gay shit too..
Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!
wtf... this wasnt all that good....
Nigka, don't step and change, cuz you're slow, jus like yo flows
The chances of you winnin' is small... kinda like yo fuckin' nose
this had me laughing...nice persnoal...
You holdin' shit in,bee... you kno we fuckin' kno it
Look at yo face, you kno it too, your mouth expression show it
rhyme scheme was dumb... but also had me laughing
Ain't no poet, why you flow it, nigka you flex in vain
There's a gap in our skill levels, hoe, like yo neck and chain's
this was a ok closer....

your shit was fucking weak man......compared to what you had in that tourny or what you had agaisnt Feebs... but it was ok.. some of your lines were just straght fuckied up... i didnt liked how you rhymed so scnario get that... also ya flow was ok but not as good as scenarios...also you had some played concepts..... Scenario took it with the punches by a very lil bit... but SPuL took the personals stirght.....also thr LMAO factor was givin to SPUL.. it was very funny... but was good...
Score: 7.8

kinda close but i gave this to SPuL for strong personals.... and no self glorification.... which threw off some of Scenarios verses....

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Voted For: SPuL

nice shit dawg

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Spu you took this due to the better punches.... your structure was good and your flow was onpoint... the links you had was okay but i didnt realy like them

Eye-your shit wasnt the best and your fucking links just didnt do the job.... keep elevating though mjan.... your punches was okay but not anything good

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Voted For: SPuL

banks:

your verse was decent but it was too basic your first 2 or 3 bars were extremely wack and werent needed... they killed your verse you had a couple witty punches and personals and the cher and prince mating bar was dope as fuck probably the best bar in this battle.. but you came to basic.

spul:

dont get me wrong youre a hoecake, but your verse was more consistent you stayed on with good punches all the way through but please dont ever use a bar like this again

"Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!"

that was so basic it was pathetic, but otherwise your punches was good and a couple decent personals the opener was good grabbed my attention and throwin his pic in there made you win

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lmao..funny battle..

Banks: damn man..that was a alrite verse..but really, it ain't dat good, u kinda talked about ur self more then dissin him... ur structure was good, but ur punches wasn't basiclly, it flowed okay until the sid vicious line..dat ruined the flow... u had alrite personals, but please next time don't use links cuz ppl do'nt like to search for the links n shyt...
7/10

spul: lmao..same as usuall, always funny as hell n good punches at the same time... lol, n don't post a pic. next time cuz a pic dat big takes forever to vote..ur strucutre was alrite..but still flowed very well, verty good punches, n i guess u had a good personal (da pic) lmao..they were funny as hell...just use better vocab next time man..dats all dats needed..

8/10


vote: Spul

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