besides my own...and b.i detained...and nostra.....this is the dopest open mic i've seen in a while...imagery was definately there....emotion was as on point as it could have possibly been....and a very well told story and ending...this definately has my vote for OM of the month

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

this was dope...8.6/10...very dope good vocab and wordplay...tightness..weerdizzle...drop feed on me and indephes collab link in the sig

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Eyes burning with hatred like acid cos vision rates red…
Research last kiss in diary and cry at what the date said…
-THAT WAS AN GOOD OPENER U EXPRESSED CHA FEELINGS NICE

Pupil’s Iris locked on to my wrist as the minutes pass away…
Digesting the bottles contents when used to be glass a day…
- NICE WORDPLAY HERE GODO EMOTIONAL BAR


Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question…
Watching in dismay at their new found loving contention…
-O AIIIIGHT IAM FEELING THIS PART GOOD VOCAB AND FEELIGNS W/ EMOTIONAL

Set my heart on opposite gender resulting in an organ collapse…
Spirit fall like leaves when the branches reach autumn relax…
-WHOA~! NICE WORDPLAY MAYNE



Consciously view his scaled lips coress her almost perfect skin…
Used to be my position now its his arms that shes lost within…
-O AIIIIIGHT IAM FEELING THIS PART GOOD EXPRESSION EVERY LIL DETAIL


Stay still, stationary trying to hold my head with elevation…
Fingers clamped to my palm stopping blood from circulation…
- SO THIS DA PART WHERE U GET HEATED, NICE EXPRESSION


Feel frustration the anger build inside these unknown places…
Uncovered ground bringing me to these un-a-tone phases….
-NICE GOOD WORDPLAY,


Hate to feel this way, let jealousy control my inner emotion…
Flash backs of the night I found cracks in her sinning devotion…
- WORD NICE VOCAB


Erosion of belief and trust, I had it close but lost for lust…
This girls a must, but left my surroundings in a cloud of dust…
-GOOD EMOTION. GOOD FEELINGS U EXPRESSED HERE


Although I’m hurt inside with love and hate about to collide…
The feelings I store within won’t drift aside like the ocean tide…
-WHOA NICE META GOOD WORDPLAY TO GO WITH IT


Can’t stand and watch a family where the fences withstand me…
Human traffic with one route but no one will understand me…
-O AIIIIIIIIGHT NICE MAYNE

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With the sun pulled to the ground, only darkness not a sound…
He leaves the premises reminisce on that moment n wot I found…
As I see that red mist I cross from sanity to prison bound…
View the corpse on the floor beaten round a vision on ground…
-O DAMN NICE FLOW GOOD VOCAB HERE MAYNE


Then it hit harder than anything to ever enter my intellect…
If I love her so much, why did I choose to live in~regret…
- TRUE GOOD CLOSA NICE


AIIIIIGHT PREM- U HAD FLOW, GOOD EMOTION BEING ESTABLISH IN THIS PIECE HERE, GOOD VOCAB, GOOD META'Z, AND WORDPLAYS, THE FEELINGS U EXPLAIN EVERY LIL DETAIL THATS WHAT I MOST LIKE ABOUT THIS OM...........WORD

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

uppin

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Ill drop best one I saw the whole time I was here. I like ur style.

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still uppin



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Damn yo,I was caught into it just lookin at the opener fam.
The opener alone is something that could be quoted on a daily bases.
The content was deep and Ironically Talib Kweli quality.
I just found the biggest respect from you,by reading this.
This WILL be hall of famed.Get @ me on AIM NOW!

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theres only one word i can really use to describe that piece......FLAWLESS...10/10