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Jay-SmileZ | 2 | 28.57% | |
Inception | 5 | 71.43% | |
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03-07-05, 03:25 AM | #31 |
Light Weight
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IP: 1801 DFC3
Voted For: Inception
this was omse what of a wack battle both of you need to work on strucure you both ahd similer styles but i give this to you becuase you had better multies, both need to work on wordplay alot aswell as metaphores all of the punches where very weak...just eleavte/// |
03-07-05, 04:33 PM | #32 | |
The Silent Killer
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IP: A5FF 6F6F
Voted For: Inception
Jay-SmileZ: Man you lost me at the first sentence, number one, you wRotE iT lIkE tHiS and number to, man you were all over the place, your flow wasn't real soild, I wasn't really diggin that man. Inception: "only tyme you nice on tha block is helpin old ladies across tha street" that shyt was tight man, I laughed at that. You had it pretty solid, but some of your verses were getting long at some points, it was coo, but I wasn't really diggin that. Overall you both did good, but theres always room for improvement.
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