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Old 11-28-04, 08:10 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by .Indeph.
true that battle verse wasn't one of the best

but yaw underated that like whoa
and Mike be real

even since I was ProVerse you didn't really like me period

even when you agreed on something with me..and then when you found

out it was just me with a changed name you said "he''s a gay fucker"

and if anyone drops in here the highest they'll get is probably

"ok" but thanks for critin anyways...peace

Ok...I didn't like you...but don't I do the same shit to everyone?
Exactly...My break down wasn't bias at all mayne.
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Old 11-28-04, 08:08 PM   #2
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me=gully...

so dont mess.....
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Old 11-28-04, 08:09 PM   #3
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Chaos from my battle with him.

I'll Rip YA Head Off-and Shove It Up Ya Ass Untill It Reaches Ya Chest!!!.....
Then Break All Ya Ribs Untill The Doctor Says Its-Too-Complex-Too-Fix!!.....
wtf...wheres the punch?
I'll Murder You- In 1000 Different ways!!.....
And Make Your Face Like Your Spelling-Not Finished All The Way!!.....(it says jerz.....as his location)
Shit was ass...someone used this in like...june
You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!.....
The Only Time You'll Win-A-Match..Is If The Person Doesn't WRITE BACK!!.....(checks in but doesn't drop there verse)
Wow, I've said something like this before
Your Pathetic-No One Wants You At This Site!!.....
Thats Pretty Bad-When You got Lady Fiya-Telling Ya.... You-Need-To-Take-A-Hike!!.....
LMAO....Fake-Ass-Personal...wack.
Fuck A Medic-Aid-Like Speading-Cancer-Plague!!.....
You Wouldn't Win-Even If You Were Made Too-In A Role-Playing Game!!.....
...gay.
E-Style?-I Don't Even Want To Get On That Subject!!!.....
A Whole Bunch Of Rejects-Trying To Make It Public!!!.....
wow.
Really You Just A Bitch-And I don't Got Time To Play With Little Kids!!!.....
But Why Is Ya Crew-Made For The Herbs That Got More Losses-Than-Winz!!.......(his whole crew got more losses than wins on there record)
Another fake personal...

Thats how I see it..voters saw it otherwise...
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Old 11-28-04, 08:11 PM   #4
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fucking rate mine dammit
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Old 11-28-04, 08:13 PM   #5
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Our Intelligence Authentic still over all stupidity reins
Why else would a misdemenor syndicate call out our our name?
no punch...wack
Elevated above all these bullshit foolish nonsensensical flows
You bitches on a porno set when i mic check and im John Holmes
dont kno who John holmes is..
Ressurected still respected what you though itd be diffrent?
You cornball ass crews still aint lifted stuck with the same gimmics
Again, no punch
Battle please we own you like projects and white tees
Keep ya comments to yaself we got it in check like Nikes
heard it..Tony Yayo used this like in 2002
We owned you and if not then some bitch whos exactly the same
A.I run in the stands and beat down fans like piston games
I used this twice already...

All your lines were either shit Ive seen, or jus not punches...jus like indeph...work on makin up some new ideas for punches.
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Old 11-28-04, 08:14 PM   #6
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It's the truth.
I don't even know who's verse that was.
So I can't be hating. =/
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Old 11-28-04, 08:14 PM   #7
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critique this diss verse i did in an OM to 2by4 and Un'touched

2 by 4 is gettin turned into 'ashes' after my 'fire' erupts...
un'touched is a fuck with no luck so he hangs on 2by4's nuts...
ducked outa our crew cuz eventually we'da knew your rhymes suck...
stuck your fag bf in our thread sayin for us to leave you alone...
owned your names and thrown ur shame back and your both now sonned...
get emericas finest out ya sig bitch you might as well be sigless...
biggest faggots in m.a.b. better of ina 'r.i.p' so ppl can 'dig it'...*
you bitches might as well be labeled a 'guch' cuz we just can figure...*
who is the 'pussy' and who is the 'ass' but ima split ya with ligatures...
signature needs to be fixed but he dont wana just cuz he paid for it...*
prolly laid his bf for it, 'popd' his cheery,'whined' now he's 'corkless'...*
uncrafty and rhaspy cuz i punked you out real fast and really nasty...
lyrically past me? nope cuz you aint dope,n ya 'candys' not 'everlastin'...*
lastly ya shanty of a twigs is not standing cuz im like the big bad wolf...
shook down ur straw town but the bricks your without,their somethin i took...


*2by4 was in the rip
*guch is between an ass and pussy
*dont wana get rid of his sig cuz he paid for it...
*you pop a wine cork get it
*everlasting gobstoppers dont last neither will their skill

thanks
peace~1
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Old 11-28-04, 08:16 PM   #8
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Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Koolaid you couldnt come with a punch


Explanations-
real simple i koed A.Is text general archeologist the phantom of the opera for the first bar hes getting whacker for the second bar 5-0 is police meta for votes BILL MURRAY was the star of ghostbusters his crew is a.i and his avy look at it and see.Peace and all honest explained votes are returned so be honest and dont hate vote!!
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Old 11-28-04, 08:17 PM   #9
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Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
coo
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
lol
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
no
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
nah
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
nooooooo
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
noooooooo!
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed
coo
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Old 11-28-04, 08:19 PM   #10
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Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
coo
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
lol
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
no
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
nah
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
nooooooo
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
noooooooo!
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed
coo


aight coo..........i see what i need to work on
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Old 11-28-04, 08:17 PM   #11
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hows that bitch?
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Old 11-28-04, 08:18 PM   #12
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Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
Weak...
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
lol...ok
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
gay..links aree wack
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
lmao..im guessin he lost to thug life...
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
forced like fuck
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
my friend used a check punch.......in 7th grade.
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed
didnt really like..

One of the better verses...
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Old 11-28-04, 08:20 PM   #13
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Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
no
Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
not a punch
Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
nah
A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
not a punch foo
Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Koolaid you couldnt come with a punch
playyyyyyed
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Old 11-28-04, 08:23 PM   #14
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BTW you gotta do streetryda Mike.

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Old 11-28-04, 08:26 PM   #15
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2 by 4 is gettin turned into 'ashes' after my 'fire' erupts...
un'touched is a fuck with no luck so he hangs on 2by4's nuts...
ducked outa our crew cuz eventually we'da knew your rhymes suck...
Don't do something like this in your text again..a three line bar? gay.
stuck your fag bf in our thread sayin for us to leave you alone...
owned your names and thrown ur shame back and your both now sonned...
dont rhyme...weak
get emericas finest out ya sig bitch you might as well be sigless...
biggest faggots in m.a.b. better of ina 'r.i.p' so ppl can 'dig it'...*
only line i liked
you bitches might as well be labeled a 'guch' cuz we just can figure...*
who is the 'pussy' and who is the 'ass' but ima split ya with ligatures...
wack
signature needs to be fixed but he dont wana just cuz he paid for it...*
prolly laid his bf for it, 'popd' his cheery,'whined' now he's 'corkless'...*
'this' 'was' 'an' 'almost' if we knew' 'what corkless' 'had to' 'do with' 'anything
uncrafty and rhaspy cuz i punked you out real fast and really nasty...
lyrically past me? nope cuz you aint dope,n ya 'candys' not 'everlastin'...*
lol...wtf@havin candy being a compliment
lastly ya shanty of a twigs is not standing cuz im like the big bad wolf...
shook down ur straw town but the bricks your without,their somethin i took...
huh?

weak...try and drop SOME strong punches...stop all the quotin ever last word.
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