Voted For: Parallel

50CMI:

Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
^^ decent 5/10
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
^^wack 2/10
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
^^ehh decent personal 6/10

overall : 13/30 (43%)

parallel:

50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One
^^wack 4/10
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay
^^decent 5/10
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter
^^ wtf lol decent better than the rest 5/10

overall : 14/30 (47%)

vote: parallel

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Voted For: Parallel

Nice battle by both felt that 50 could have come better
with more complexity but didn't. P come nice vocab and
wordplay killed it, he droped an all round better verse.

50 come nice but you need to up your game man..

P's best bar,.
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter
^Nice personal, flow, vocab and punch.

50,,..
Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
^Nice personal, and wordplay...

Both come alright but I felt that P droped an alround better
verse then 50.

Vote ~ Parallel

i cant believe this little kid....haha gets beat and has to do this o well uppin

What should've rhymed was:
Jackson
Win one

And it didn't...cockmuncher

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Voted For: Parallel

Para took this one
punches were harder..better structure
and tha flow was good too...

50..u need to elevate more...those punches
were weak..

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sup man....since i cant vote i will give you feedback...pretty nice structure and all...still got alot of imagination huh...atleas you aint saying rimes like ''me'' and '' me '' lol anyway i didnt really like the opening...didnt rime but that line about:
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay

it was my favorite one..

Voted For: Parallel

vote para heres my reason
flow para
punches tie
opener-closer para
vocab para
imagry para
multi para
over all para
and plz hit up on my links peace.

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Voted For: Parallel

A'ight...this was a close battle, but I'ma have to give it tp Parallel...some decent punches, a lil played, but it was enough to take this battle...better flow, better structure...no hate, return the fav if you havent already...links in sig...peace...

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Vote: Paralell

Paralell
Mad wordplay in ur drop g, liked the way it flowed and i think i spootted sum multi flow gettin going in this....all i can say really is work on your structure..you had some creative punches that were original and not played..keep dis up overall - 8.5/10

50Cent
there was nothing wrong in your drop...except for the played as wordplay on wood not hitting back etc ur 2nd bar was not a punch you actuall agve him props...although overall it was a decent drop...work on more creative and original wordplay and punches.. overall 7/10

RTF -links in sig

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