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| Chuck Low |
  
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5 | 71.43% |
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2 | 28.57% |
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02-24-05, 10:05 PM
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IP: 1D02 B26F
Voted For: Chuck Low
STYLE: mediocre attempt by both; javelin u couldve edged this if u actually had decent rhymes less the 1st 2 lines PUNCH: i felt nothing here guys. "Tha Only Reason U Eva Held A Glock Is Cuz U A Cop" ok... and? "Next Thing U Know U Busted By Javelin" dont throw punches at urself Javelin, get to the point, n u couldve edged this as well FLOW: didnt feel urs Jav, Chuck's was ok, last line was a drag tho TECHNIQUE: good try Jav, but ur overall ideas didnt sink in; defensive take by Chuck, should work on broadening ur thoughts and go on the offensive. S: =tiE= P: =tiE= F: Chuck Low > Javelin T: Chuck Low > Javelin OVERALL: good concept Chuck, but again, not hard enough hits; Javelin this is a battle, not a page in ur diary VOTE: Chuck Low by the way... canada aint ALWAYS cold, n glocks are not commonly used by cops.
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02-25-05, 10:47 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: Chuck Low
Aight, not the greatest battle But chuck got this because of the better structure, both had some played out punches, an i couldnt understand Jabelins flow, but Chuck came harder with the better structure, an better wordplay, so chuck gets my vote...... Return the fave in any of my battles u see floatin around Peace
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