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Old 01-09-05, 01:34 PM   #1
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I hope you like it dabatos....
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Old 01-09-05, 03:48 PM   #2
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aight Dabatos i got a poem coming up........... so wait up, aight...........
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Old 01-09-05, 03:49 PM   #3
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nvm cuz i ain't writing no poem about liking no female... forget that, and to those who said poems rhyme, they actually don't more than half the time...
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Old 01-09-05, 03:50 PM   #4
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ok, ima change it up so that the she is a he, but if u wanna keep it, u can change the sexes.
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ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk
AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc
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Old 01-09-05, 03:52 PM   #5
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^Just steal some shit from there
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Old 01-09-05, 03:55 PM   #6
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i felt so sure about us, u were like a gift from god
the way you spoke, u spoke the voice of angels
i thought we had sumthing going on between us
but it seems im standing here all alone, deserted
i care 4 u, and i just gotta know if u feel the same
cause if u dont, i gues im wasting my time
i dont wanna spend effort on something that isnt there
i love u but im so confused
u said u loved me, that i was the best friend u ever knew
but now ur blowing me off and i dont know wut too feel
just tell me if u love me
or am i invisoning a thing of the past
a thing that was never there
cause i would never do anything to hurt u
i just wanna hold u in my arms
save u from the darkness
the cold, the rain
i just wanna love u

ok, it sucked, who gives a fuck?
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Old 01-09-05, 04:04 PM   #7
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so?????????????????????? u decide?
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Old 01-09-05, 07:13 PM   #8
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My feelings for you like warm sunshine on a spring day as it comes down
Your breeze of beauty floats my emotions in heavens clouds
You voice beckons me through wires to kiss your lovely lips
Yet i wait fearing rejection not sure if you will return my kiss
I have a map to the path to your love but detours have made me lose focus
I know not if we travel the same path or if the end is only of hearts broken
Im confused the fog of you and i misting my sight
But like a warrior who protects his kingdom i stand one time.............
Knowing you are worth the fight
I call you...you dont respond yet when you do it is passion of words
How am i to make a picture from the inaccurate blurs?


now pay me slut
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Old 01-09-05, 08:10 PM   #9
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My feelings for you like warm sunshine on a spring day as it comes down
Your breeze of beauty floats my emotions in heavens clouds
You voice beckons me through wires to kiss your lovely lips
Yet i wait fearing rejection not sure if you will return my kiss
I have a map to the path to your love but detours have made me lose focus
I know not if we travel the same path or if the end is only of hearts broken
Im confused the fog of you and i misting my sight
But like a warrior who protects his kingdom i stand one time.............
Knowing you are worth the fight
I call you...you dont respond yet when you do it is passion of words
How am i to make a picture from the inaccurate blurs?


now pay me slut

Hmm, pretty good.. But im lookin for someone that could write somethin of what I really feel....
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Old 01-09-05, 07:15 PM   #10
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dont duck me you little bitch.. ^
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Old 01-09-05, 07:16 PM   #11
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^i just told you set it up fag nobodys ducking you your are wack real simple
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Old 01-09-05, 07:22 PM   #12
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800 posts.. so none of your d/r can vote.
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Old 01-09-05, 08:15 PM   #13
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Poems is fucking soft.
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Old 01-09-05, 08:19 PM   #14
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^ yeah fuck THAT IMA HARD NIGGA POW POW POW

yeah but in my opinion poems are too soft and showing emotions is weird to me.
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Old 01-09-05, 08:47 PM   #15
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I personally like poems better then Topical's now, because you need more emotion for poems which is what im better at then imagery which is needed for topicals...
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