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Crisis 1 16.67%
Kesse 5 83.33%
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Old 02-17-05, 01:42 PM   #1
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Old 02-19-05, 01:44 AM   #2
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Old 02-19-05, 01:19 PM   #3
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Voted For: Kesse

this was a weak battle but here's my opinion of it:
opener: kesse
vocab: both
multis: n/a
structure: kesse
closer: crisis
kesse wins my vote cuz he came harder then crisis & hit wit more punches thru out; both of y'all need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & crisis try not 2 stretch out ur rhymes next time
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Old 02-19-05, 01:24 PM   #4
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Old 02-19-05, 10:12 PM   #5
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Old 02-20-05, 06:02 AM   #6
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Old 02-20-05, 03:24 PM   #7
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Old 02-20-05, 04:32 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for Kesse

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tHIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BIGZ TO BOTH,

just some wannabe punk looking for some success to aquire
but you'd have more luck trying to turn water to fire


THAT WAS A NICE LINE MAN, YOU GUYS HAD SOME CHOPPY FLOW THO, BOTH OF U, BUT IN THE END I WENT WITH KESSE
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Old 02-20-05, 04:43 PM   #9
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Voted For: Kesse

jea kesse gets this easily....

won by better punches...and better personals...could wordplay with his name..shit was decent..........bad structure though...and ok flow...

crisis: better structure..attempted at multi's but it didnt work..LMFAO..you need to elevate...the punches was weak...and the personals..there was none

vote: kesse
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Old 02-20-05, 05:14 PM   #10
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Kesse - Good drop here...the structure could use a bit of work as not all the lines are the same length. But for what you used if flowed nicely. Good use of differnt vocabulary than most people on this site. You had some good punches in here that connected pretty good. My favourtie line was probably...

and whats with the name, you in some kind of struggle
or maybe its because you got no balls to juggle

Good drop. 7/10.


Crisis - Nothing to special here. Your verse was pretty played. I have seen all your punches thrown before in other verses. Your structure was a off as well...but instead your flow was kind of choppy. Just wasn't really feeling your verse. To elevate fix your structure and flow and work on better non-played out punches. 5/10

Vote: Kesse.
 
 


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