lol he wrott more lines? let me battle you and writt 100 line with only one word in it,imma be winning then? anyway i give you this win armada

Voted For: Damian

speats had a good opener. Rhyming was a little weak but nice punch onb a personal level. After that the punches were real good and hitting home. Verse was a lot shorter than his but in my opinion more effective. The flow from line to line was real good and the there was no problems with the structure. I liked the bits about titanic and babydick. Well i liked it all but that stood out. And the close was good, nice punch hit him personally

Armada: You had some punches there that were good but generally it looked like you were just throwing in everything that came into your head. You need to take more time and care in my opinion. opener was ok, liked the bit aboutt he mad cow disease but the structure and flow of that opening 4 lines wasnt good. ya verse was too long, i read the whole thing and was left tink, "all that and no real quality lines". there was a few quality lines but too many whack ones.
Good bit: "Damian is a enviromentalist Faggot, Tryin to fuck trees
Take a look at his countrys flag representin "Maple Leafs"
But this was an obvious fake personal, apart from using his flag. Structure was off and it didnt flow too great. I think you should take ya time a bit more.
"He aint lickin one dick at a time dis fool can lick 10 wit it
Diss niggas a fuckin joke man,Armada leave you dead fam, Ima dat nigga comin for you strait outta maryland//"
-This is probaly the worst line i seen since i been on this site

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same here for caos darenegade
i voted againts him and he voted TWO tmies against me

im jus chillin lettin the votes stand im not dqin anything fuck dat


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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Armada
Alright This Battle Was Cool, Both Need To Elevate On Your Vocabulary Though, Both Need Some Work On Your Structure Armada, Had This Battle Though It Had Some Nice Punches To It, Also Had Some Personals Which Came In Handy, Although Both Need To Still Work On Mult'is Aramada Came With Them, Meta's Could Be Added To Improved But Any Way

Punches-Armada
Vocab-Armada
Structure-Tie
Personals-Tie
OverAll Armada Had, This Battle, Peace No Hate

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Well this battle overall wasn't anything special guys couple lame punches here and there but Armada takes this with his structure well written verse obviously more time put into it and it came out pretty good but way better than Speats but hey keep elevating bro
Vote - Armada Da 187

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