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dats not a vote it was meant as feedback^^^ill vote for real when someone drops one on mines

Voted For: headgames


HeadGames
Alright, Nice Verse, Had Some Decent Punches In Here, Also Had Some WordPlay That I Liked, Vocabulary Was Decent, Structure Was Decent, And Came With Neat Personals, THis Verse Was Creative, Your Opener Came Out Strong, But The Body Of The Verse, Wasn't As Good As The Closer, But It Was Neat Nuff To Get You This Battle, Some Lines Was Played, But Other Made Up For Them, Strong Verse.....9/10

C.A.L.I
Okay Your Punches Came Out Strong, But WordPlay Wasn't To Good, You Had Some Basic Vocabulary That Didn't Really Help Your Verse At All, You Structure Was Chaotic....Personals Wasn't Hitting Hard, Most Of Them Was Played, Your Body Of The Verse I Admit Was Better Then HeadGames, But Opener And Closer, Made You Go Down In THis Battle, As Well As The Vocabulary And Structure, Over All This Battle Was Pretty Close....8.5/10

Structure, Was All HeadGames, Punches Was A Tie, But Vocabulary And Personals Has To Go To HeadGames, Due To C.A.L.I.'s Played Out Personals, Decent Battle Both Could Do Better, I Saw You Both Write Better Before

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Headgames:
It was a good verse. But for real, punches werent that great. Flow was fine, blah blah blah... but the punches... pretty much your whole verse was based on that pic. Thats aight for like 2 bars maybe. But it gives the impression you havent got much else to talk about. And empire pic punches are getting kinda played nowadays.

cali: There wasnt any really bad lines. But some were just more funny than others. All the ones you had a lead up to were nice. Flow was on. Structure was fine...

You both came strong, but headgames lost this cos of his sub-par punches...

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

punches-c.a.l.i
metals-none
persnals-cali
multis-none
flow-HG
struck-HG

im going to give my vote to cali he came hard with persnals and puches he get my vote easy

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

headgames you had one good line in your verse: I'll break your legs faster... then you do to all your chairs. the waves line was ok but the bowl punch just took too long to get to it.

cali you had alot of good lines but this one killed: Says he came here to beat me......guess thats why his hands on my dick!

flow: rough for both but cali 's was alittle better
style: Head game it was just piss me off cali all the ...... and enters
vocab:cali used 8 letter words head game used 6
punches: cali tryed
personal hard to tell but you both were off the hook wit um but i'm go with head game
mults: acouple from cali
rhyme scheme: head game
overall vote cali

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Voted For: headgames

Wow...this was a very good battle. Good spits by both of you.

C.A.L.I - That was a hell of a drop. Didn'tl ike how you dissed Canada though . You verse was solid, the structure was easily understandable and flowed pretty good. You had a barage of personals, and good punches that connected. Some of the lines were played in there, and you didn't have that much wordplay or multis, but it was still a dope drop. My favourite line is:

Im mad at ya cuz Canada aint known for talented rappers
Maybe thats why.........
you pay half a mil for votes in ya battles!!(1)

^ That hit pretty hard and gave me a good laugh. Very good drop C.A.L.I... 8/10

headgames - This was probably the best verse you have ever dropped on RV. You have really elevated a lot. You had a good easy to read structure that flowed well too. Your punches and personals were basically based around his picture and they all hit pretty hard. My favourite line was"

You's a slacker, and wack too, no joke man, I swear...
I'll break your legs faster... then you do to all your chairs

^ that was good. headgames you brought more wordplay to this battle than C.A.L.I did and had better use of multies. This was a very good drop...8.5/10

Very close battle both of you but headgames had the upper edge by using more wordplay and multies, since the punches hit their opponents practically the same.

Vote: headgames

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