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Life | 0 | 0% | |
Epic | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-21-05, 09:22 PM | #31 | |
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IP: 7CFB 3958
Voted For: Epic
Normal Punches-Traumatic, nice punches. Some creative ish in there, but some not. Masturbation? You are better then that. life, not that great punches. Unoriginal and not that strong. Personal Punches-Life, you had em, but not that good ones. Traumatic, try some more personals. Metaphors- Traumatic, less of them, but better. Life, pringles? Damn. Multiple Rhymes-Neither Structure-Traumatic, better structure, but not by much, Keep working on it man. Life, lotta stretched lines and ish. Flow-Decent flow, punches kept it going. Life, decent flow, fell off sometimes. Word Play-Nice wordplay, LIFE was good, but try to avoid other MC's names. Life, not a lot of wordplay. Work on having more wordplay and wittier at that. Traumatic, not bad man. Punches were nice, but you need to try some personals. Life, ok verse. Try some better punches, word play, and personals. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Traumatic One Vote. One Battle. One Win
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02-21-05, 09:25 PM | #32 |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: Epic
K I vote for u cus u had better punches and way better scheme then life but as far as rhymes and shit u guys kep up with each other but Life man No offense but u suck u need to elevate and practice a lot but this was a Ok battle u really need to work on ur Punches oh shit what am I sayin u need to work on everything so my vote goes to.......... vote goes to Traumatize for better punches in this one. |
02-21-05, 10:20 PM | #33 | |
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
Voted For: Epic
damn.... dis battle went one way really....i dont really think it was even close... life= man weak opener.... you need suttin that makes your reader go "oooohh" right out of the gate... kinda a weak core as well.... flow was all over the place, i couldnt really stay with it, especially towards da end.... you had one or two decent punches, but they werent even that great... overall, i jus wasnt feelin your verse at all, nuttin i really liked about it... trauma- trauma on the other hand... i loved this verse... hard hittin punches all da way through your flow was on point da whole way as well... but the punches were madd nice, and you kept em going which is what i like to see.... trauma came wit some crazy stuff... life came wit some weak stuff... not very close in my book trauma takes this... v/trauma
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