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View Poll Results: The Black Plague vs. hotshh!
hotshh! 5 83.33%
The Black Plague 1 16.67%
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Old 02-24-05, 06:17 PM   #31
Typical
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IP: 888C 2BD4

Voted For: hotshh!

Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies
My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me

ok whats up with the played opener?

When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses
Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses

played follow up, what u think no one thought of that?

I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network
Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first

alias never got droped which negates ya opener, and the punch was weak

Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc
Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc

used the rhyming word twice, weak concept

black, ya shit was played half way and the other half stretched, really not a good verse at all


U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It..
I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1
Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision
Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the t ightest Man Living

line kinda wack, but the pic is funny haha

Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer
Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer

no to the punch
To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In
U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins

hahahaha...1st good line in this shit

You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do
Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You..

nice closer


hotshh was up with this weak shit? you lucky ya boy came played but u had 2 good lines to get the win

v/hotshh
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Old 02-24-05, 06:31 PM   #32
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 888C 2BD4

def appreciate that^^.....................fucking marathon battle!
 
Old 02-25-05, 07:12 PM   #33
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 888C 2BD4

comonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnn
 
Old 02-26-05, 12:23 PM   #34
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 888C 2BD4

damn, u had votes dq'd?
so it changed from 3-2 to 2-1?
thank you for making this battle another month long
 
Old 02-26-05, 12:41 PM   #35
MjGrEeN
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From: England
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Voted For: hotshh!

Hotshh i've got inspiration off some of your battles as i am kinda new wit this and my rec aint great...This was anothet good battle, the punchline was very good and the personal using the picture n shit was cool, your flow was good and everything fit, coulda added a multi somehwere in there tho, woulda been tight
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Old 02-26-05, 12:43 PM   #36
MjGrEeN
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i would also like to mention Plague's opener weren't great and the opener should be good to gtet people reading and some of his lines seemed stretched or didn't fit
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Old 02-26-05, 12:43 PM   #37
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Old 02-26-05, 01:15 PM   #38
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From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

Voted For: hotshh!

U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It..
I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit
decent bar, pretty basic
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1
Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision
Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living
good
Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer
Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer
decent bar, punch was okay
To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In
U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins
good, good here
You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear
Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear
uhh…hmm…pretty decent
You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do
Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You..
nice closer here
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Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies
My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me
good punch…
When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses
Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses
okay punch was plain here
I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network
Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first
nice…was feelin this one
You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit
Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick
nah, this was kinda weak here
Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc
Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc
okay, punch was decent
Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet
If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it
closer was ight

Overall both had good drops, but hotshh! Had a better drop by a hair
Both had good flows, hotshh had the punches though, but overall
Both had good drops, just that hotshh! Came a little harder in this 1

No hate to both....
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Old 02-26-05, 02:51 PM   #39
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Voted For: hotshh!

lol i read this n forgot to vote but yea man u took this one more than easy.. tbp your structi=ure was off n your shit ws really extended try to short'n up ya lines more when u only thing that i thought was better was tbp opener but otherwise hotshh took it cuz he was consistent tbp you woulda took'n it but your shit was all over the place .


hotshh took..
closer
meta
punches
structure
n appeal

tbp took...
opener
punches


Vote//Hotshh!
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