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View Poll Results: The Black Plague vs. hotshh! | |||
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5 | 83.33% |
The Black Plague |
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1 | 16.67% |
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Apollyon
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IP: 888C 2BD4
Voted For: hotshh!
Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me ok whats up with the played opener? When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses played follow up, what u think no one thought of that? I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first alias never got droped which negates ya opener, and the punch was weak Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc used the rhyming word twice, weak concept black, ya shit was played half way and the other half stretched, really not a good verse at all U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It.. I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1 Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the t ightest Man Living line kinda wack, but the pic is funny haha Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer no to the punch To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins hahahaha...1st good line in this shit You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. nice closer hotshh was up with this weak shit? you lucky ya boy came played but u had 2 good lines to get the win v/hotshh
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
def appreciate that^^.....................fucking marathon battle!
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
damn, u had votes dq'd?
so it changed from 3-2 to 2-1? thank you for making this battle another month long |
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Flyweight
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
Voted For: hotshh!
Hotshh i've got inspiration off some of your battles as i am kinda new wit this and my rec aint great...This was anothet good battle, the punchline was very good and the personal using the picture n shit was cool, your flow was good and everything fit, coulda added a multi somehwere in there tho, woulda been tight
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Flyweight
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
i would also like to mention Plague's opener weren't great and the opener should be good to gtet people reading and some of his lines seemed stretched or didn't fit
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I walk & walk over you
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: hotshh!
U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It.. I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit decent bar, pretty basic http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1 Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living good Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer decent bar, punch was okay To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins good, good here You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear uhh…hmm…pretty decent You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. nice closer here . . . . . Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me good punch… When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses okay punch was plain here I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first nice…was feelin this one You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick nah, this was kinda weak here Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc okay, punch was decent Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it closer was ight Overall both had good drops, but hotshh! Had a better drop by a hair Both had good flows, hotshh had the punches though, but overall Both had good drops, just that hotshh! Came a little harder in this 1 No hate to both....
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: hotshh!
lol i read this n forgot to vote but yea man u took this one more than easy.. tbp your structi=ure was off n your shit ws really extended try to short'n up ya lines more when u only thing that i thought was better was tbp opener but otherwise hotshh took it cuz he was consistent tbp you woulda took'n it but your shit was all over the place . hotshh took.. closer meta punches structure n appeal tbp took... opener punches Vote//Hotshh!
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