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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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Voted For: A_M_H
Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south Umm... Ok Personal... Hella Simple Though... I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery First Line Was Blah... Second Doesn't Punch... Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show Rainbow = Gay... Second Line Didn't Punch... every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? Lego Blocks CONNECT... And No... It's Lightning That Shocks Mother Fucker... Plus It's Self Hype So It's Irrelevant Anyway... Overall - Pretty Weak... Didn't Really Throw Any Punches... Simplistic Verse... Hardly Any Multies Or Inside Rhyming... 2.5/10... U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Played... And Self Hype... divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines Cool... Nice Wordplay... having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool LoL... Funny, But What Does Chlorine Have To Do With Anything..? open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" Aight... Cool Wordplay... Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack Umm... No... this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy Irrelevant... Overall - This Waz Aight... Some Shyt Was Irrelevant And Didn't Make Sense, But You Had Wordplay And Multies... And Some Ok Punches... 6.5/10 Vote - A_M_H... Due To A More Complex Verse... Complex Rhyme Scheme... Not To Mention Wordplay And He Through Some Punches... Nameplays... |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
i am now cuz i didn't pick up on it at 1st good lookin'
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
i could dq all his votes, there all unexplained, but i aint that way..
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IP:
Voted For: A_M_H
U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping good punch divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines not bad having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool dont rally get it open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" haha, good punch Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack aight punch n dope multie this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy good shit. Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south not a punch I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery that didnt really rhyme Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show haha, not bad every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? i liked tha lego blocks thang vote=amh, no hate affinity Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Voted For: A_M_H
a m h gets my vote. he had good punches. affinity, u didnt really have any punches, only like one. n it wuznnt that good. this is pretty much a one sided battle. no hate affinity, just keep elevating and working on your punches. u both had good flow. and u both had good structure. no hate affinity. n a m h had better multies, payce Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Voted For: A_M_H
aiight Affinity, your shit was ok. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the stretched forced bars makes it look herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 7.5/10 AMH, you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10 I think this was real close battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job. but vote/ AMH |
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I Got Money In Tha Bank
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Voted For: A_M_H
had to go wit amh cuz he had betta metaz, it didnt flow as good as affinity, but almost all of affinities rhymes seemed forced in some way or fashion, but u both can do sum elevatin
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Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: A_M_H
iight AFFINITY, your shit was pretty nice. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the rainbow statements make it sound herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 8/10 AMH, you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10 I think this was real close battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job. but vote/ AMH |
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