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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Lots of similies in here, lots. It made it an interesting verse to read, and seemed a little creative. You had some hard hitting punches, and good flow and structure, which is important for a text verse. Good job, on this verse.

Jimmy you had a good verse, but some of the punches were a little played, and the ones that wernt' you ruined by explaining your punches. If you have to explain your punches, your losing all the possible wit you might of had in your punch, and it ruins your verse.

Vote/ Flow

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

whoa....

Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick

ehhh..damn troop....ya opener wasn't all that good...i expected more from you

No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane

ok line... nothing spectacular....

You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way

seemed a lil stretched to me... not really a punch to it

This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix

ok...you must not be feeling well...the whole shaq at the free throw line shyt is kinda old...not to mention kinda corny....woulda been a decent personal if not for the Shaq line

15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens

definitely ya best line and a pretty damn decent closer..punch was there


You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'

^^^this is an opener..good shyt flow...seen a similar line but you flipped it

Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'

ehhh...ok line...didn't excite me though

Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun

simple but funny....semi effective

Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse

damn!...that's dirty right there...lol... i like that one

This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick

closer wasn't as strong as troop's but ya easily took this one... troop didn't seem too focused this time around