my god, a vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

c'mon peeps...........UPPIN YO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Uppin Yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yes it is me..............uppin again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
that shit is ill son...dope ass punch and personal, sick opener - 9/10
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
dope wordplay, ok cpncept, nice personal on tha crew name - 8/10
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
ok filler, personal, aight punch ...decent -8/10
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
lol..not bad..original concept..gd humour..decent punch -8.5/10
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
errr...this dont really work...6/10
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
lol..gd closer, again wid an original touch..punch is hard..good closer -8.5/10

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
meh..not really adiss/punch at all.....wheres the cuss? weak opener-6/10
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
ok vocab, not bad concept...decent punch -7.5/10
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
its a bit generic, not really hard hitting and palyed concept - 7/10
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
its funny, but its not actually a diss/punch..-7/10
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
much better, personal, hard punch, gd concept, dope bar -8.5/10
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
meh...gd attempt but it dnt really come off..flows well..ok bar -8/10
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime
err..no...bad bar 2 put as ur closer, its weak basically - 7/10

VOTE= KING SOLO for a more solid and personal drop
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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

damn, this was pretty close..........but in all honesty, im going to have to give this victory to king solo.

both of you gentlemen had nice punches, clean structure and decent vocabulary. in my opinion, each of you had a pretty consisitant flow carrying your verses. both of you had me laughing out loud at some point in time or another during your pieces........nice. i appreciate a good chuckle now and then.

one steps best lines...

"you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?"

solos best lines...

"Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me"

my vote is based solely on enjoyability. when i was finished reading both pieces.......i picked the one that stuck out more to me. this time it happened to be solos. congrats. he just came a little bit nicer with it. i dont really have any pointers for either of you gentlemen besides keep up the good work.

oner...


...the super......big bad c.s.

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

king solo~nice opener,continues to be strong throughout verse.. effective punches here with the name personals and the crew personals, witty disses like the bitch farmer bar, your closer was very good in this battle, again, very witty battle verse, like the bold
statement, ties everything together well, that was dope with what you did with "whored"...good job..
one step beyond~ i see where you tried to go with this verse,but it seemed you tried to jumble everything in at once to fit, i like your vocabulary, but your structure could use work,i like the "garbage,takin you out weekly line",some decent personals on his profile,but i feel you could have come stronger,with what you had to work with, overall good job both,but i felt king had the more creative verse of the two, so he gets my vote..1

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