Voted For: MaRVJay1009

go head fag hate me then 18 wins...so now u da sickest lame???
alias is IKE u lose 2 SKEPTiKUL which hurt ya record so u switchd ya name!
^^weak opener,6.5/10
^all of its true!...marvjay's da dopest head on RV accordin 2 u
............remember when u pre wrote 4 ghoste&blackmagic???
2 of da worst mc's,you showed me ya verse on aim 4 days be4 it was due!
^^holy stretched, funny personal 6.5/10
fukkin with me u'll be shot stuck in a tree & u gon die from ya wounds.
4get dis "site" ima cum 2 ya crib & put ya "eyes" on da "blind(s)" in ya room
^^weak fam....6/10
bleedin from da face,he's a snitch known in hood 4 screamin 2 da jake's
dis niggaz parents were gon name him "typo" cuzz he was a "mistake"
^^simple, decent though...7/10
T.E dont luv u stop suckin ya crew,fake personals in ya verse nuthin is true
should of made ya name "CRiP" cuzz u only spit sick 1nce in da "BLUE"
^^nah.....5/10
you been exsposed prick ya done,might as well go get ya gun.
chances of u gettin a W,like "jenny craig turnin catholic","slim 2 nun"
^^lol,.best line outta ya verse..8/10
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marv, ya shits was stretched n barely flowed man, ya punches were really iffy, you did have some inners n atempted multi's that helped ya flow out a lil..but it didnt seem like you spent more then 10 minutes on your entire verse, no beef bro, just callin it how i read it.........39/60
Marv in hip hop?..you wouldnt get cake from it..If rap was your birthday fool
I could drop a buncha shitty non-hitting punches…...and call it wordplay too
^^lol, but it stretched beyond belief....6/10
Nobody’s feelin your style faggot…just retire…itll be dope if that time came
You claim you “shit on RV” in your OM…and only mentioned like 9 names
^^meh,...wasnt feeling the punch..5.5/10
He PM’ed me to be his partner..hesitated..didn’t think the fag seemed worthy
And clearly you came with the weakest verse we had in the tag team tourney
^^umm, wheres the wit??...5/10
You the only person feelin Marv...cause truly your not the least bit witty bitch
Look “hard”..but you soft on the inside..I compare to Mickey D’s crispy strips
^^gettin better 7/10
You claim you “Amerikaz Nightmare”…yea…maybe if you scared a nerd or 2
you claim the whole US is afraid of Marv..and only like .02% has heard of you
^^nice...8/10
HA..you said you was top 5 on Rv in text in the post if just read of yours kiddo
But you have 5 losses...and last time I checked…Five Plus One Equals Six yo
^^got it...6.5/10

invek, your shit was stretched way bad too,....why ??..
you had a couple punches that was ok, one connected good(.02% has heard of you)but other then that you both have simular styles...n stretch ya SHIT way to far, no inners which doesnt help ya flow at all.....it seemed you rushed ya verse also...38/60
this was close, you both had some decent stuff in ya verses, this could really swing either way in the end...
personally i was just feelin marvs a lil more
return the favour(its just an openmic)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185362

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnn

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Aight Check IT..

MarvJay: 7/10
You Had Personals all Throughout This Verse With Some Nice Hitting Punches. Your Vocab Wasn't Much, and Structure Is Stretched but The Verse Was Nice. Punches and Personals Won This For You.

Invekitive: 5/10
You Tried Personals but The Set-Up and Overall Punches Weren't Hitting Hard. You Need To Get Your Concepts and Directions Through Ya Verse Originized With Better Presence. Stretched Lines As Well...Not Much Vocab.

Overall Vote: MarvJay For Better Punches and Personals.

~R~

ko??? or we gotta go da 5 fam...................................

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^^he's scared.lol