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Elementality 5 100.00%
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Old 04-12-05, 08:40 PM   #1
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Dont you just love when people bring other people into this kinda shit....and how ppl only hear one side of a story which is always that "I didnt do anything at all" story. Then they think they just assume everything before getting the actual facts from both parties... well actually all 3, cause it was me chantel, and luby. So you can tell fuzzy I not to be so quick to judge when he only knows one side of a one-sided story. But I guess ignorance is bliss. By the way im not twenty years old, but thanks for calling me immature anyways.As for grudges....nah, you might call it a grudge.. But I call it not really wanting to put myself around the types of people who dont really want to treat me like a friend/act like one...but only a mere aquiantance. Its not like I just hold shit over your head, I just dont want to be your friend.... Cause you went over the edge. You may justify that everythings alright because "its only internet" But it is still technically a form of communication like it or not, so is talking on the phone, so is mailing, and so is talking face to face. So lets just quit beating a dead horse here cause its fruitless...you got what you wished for lets leave it at that.
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Old 04-13-05, 01:26 AM   #2
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It seems like theres been alot of people just looking at this shit and not puttin... anyone wanna shoe some love?
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Old 04-13-05, 09:10 AM   #3
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vote now please...................................
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Old 04-13-05, 10:04 AM   #4
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Elementality took this one...he came with better structure and better punches...his verse flowed better and his link was pretty funny...Chowie Chow your punches and lines were streched as fuck...and they didn't really hit to hard...some quotables in there though I guess....

Elementality - 7/10

Chowie Chow - 6/10

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Old 04-13-05, 10:06 AM   #5
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Hey man, apparently Neniska went to the skatepark to try and fight you....thats what Mikey Wells just told me..
 
Old 04-13-05, 09:49 PM   #6
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werd to big bird... the thing about that was....apparently his gfs house is overlooking the place where it was sposed to be at and he arrived 10 minutes later is what wayne said,,,,,coinkadink? I think not. I think he saw me leave, then called up his buddy's to try and recindle what reputation he has left.

UP UP and AWAY!!!!!
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Old 04-13-05, 10:04 PM   #7
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That is wack...

But I think his girlfriend is Lacey...doesn't she live near you? Less she moved...I dunno...she used to be like your neighbour...
 
Old 04-14-05, 10:14 AM   #8
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It lo0ks like someones already popped the cherry on this battle....whos gonna take it out on a date now?
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Old 04-14-05, 01:17 PM   #9
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Elementality

I'll start this off by adressing this guys talent at be'in whack
Rhymes are so dull and boring it give readers anxiety attacks
not bad opener...
His style is so bad that he ruins himself by even tryin to flow
Devotes his whole life nurchering something that'll never grow
ok...
You couldn't throw down if you bit all the lines off of The Game
Oh wait you did, you lost now you just hide your head in shame
not hittin hard, but true...
Heres a lesson just for y'all,never act like this fool Chowie chow
Battle people, loose respect, and end up lookin like Captain wow.
hahaha! fucking funny...

Chowie Chow

G went first, just waitin for my drop, elementality just posting nothing, trying to act tough.
Like a prisonmate's head shop, praying for fresh meat, to beat off and pound their ass rough.
ok opener...
So typical, I bet if he was in jail, niggas would eat him up like a piece of angel food cake.
Give him bleedin noses and cumed in his face, just so he can taste a strawberry milkshake.
not bad...
He has no loses, but its cause the newbies only need twenty post to vote.
They don't know the difference between a paper canoe and a motorized boat.
punch wasnt directed at opponent...
I decilined you fo a rezen, to let you rehearse........ I bet you really low on ink.
Playa is gettin fustrated, all he does is curse, Its like he'll never find the pink.
ok, coulda been worded better...
I'm more than just orange juice made from concentrate.. I'll leave ya crappen.
Just can't stare at the can, and chew gum, thinking something is goin to happen.
weak punch...
Hope you learned something, you dumb 2 dollar whore.
Just ripped you like 3 dicks in an anus, leaving ya sore.
good closer...

This was a close battle, both verses definatly had their pros and cons, lemme break this shit down tho...

Elementality:

Your verse had awsome vocab, great structure and a few pretty good punches. However, there are a few things that would have made its overall effectiveness stand out more. Such as, personals, metaphors and multies. A few of your punches coulda been worded a bit better, but all in all I felt it was a pretty strong verse.

Chowie Chow:

I enjoyed a couple of your punches and vocab was mediocre. However, I felt you werent expressing yourself to the fullest of your abilities. All that talk about prision was a little weird, but its your thinkg so I just looked at it a few times. A few lines did actually sound like The Game tho, haha. Anyways, you also could have used some metaphors, multies, personals and harder punches. One last thing I didnt really like was your structuring. Your lines are way to extended and nearing the end they got way shorter. If your structuring would have been a bit better it would have gave you a bit more of a chance of winning. But I dont judge on stricly structuring as it is only one component to my critiquing.

All in all, I feel Elementality has the harder verse from what you have read with my feedback. Good battle tho. I wanna see both of you elevate in the areas stated. Get back at me if you ever need more honest votes.

V/Elementality.................................
 
Old 04-14-05, 02:02 PM   #10
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Thanks for the feed man, preciated. up.
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Old 04-14-05, 08:57 PM   #11
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someone vote on this shit palease ! ! ! ! !
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Old 04-14-05, 09:54 PM   #12
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Did you get jumped by neniska?????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Somebody on MSN asked me that question....said they heard he jumped you today when you weren't looking.
 
Old 04-14-05, 10:10 PM   #13
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Elementality won betta punches weak ass battle though............
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Old 04-15-05, 10:11 AM   #14
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Old 04-15-05, 02:37 PM   #15
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