Uppin Up In This Bitch .................... .................

Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate
Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight”
No, played..
He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits
But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it
No.....................no..............no......... .
Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words
I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered
Eh
Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame
Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game
Terrible............
Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone
I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run
Eh...

Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick
you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT
Alright...
Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin
D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain
OK punch..
Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast
so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask
Flow was better than the punch..
This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting
D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting
Good...
feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back
The lost is to bad jus leave
.bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back"
Eh closer...

532, wasn't feeling the spit, too simplistic, plus I really don't dig mainstream rap references, plus your lines could have really used some beefing up because they were too flimsy to be effective

Stanza, good spits, all punches, 2 were a little weak, but the rest were solid....try incoprorating some more personals, but if that ain't your game, just stick with the punches...

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Flow - I wasnt really feeling either flow, the lines seemed too short

Punches - Nothing spectacular but stanza's last two bars were alright

Personals - D had more personals but none of them really hit hard.

Multies - tied because they both had a bar with words rhyming with "shit"

Vocab - both werent very good, elevate

Originality - a lot of both of your verses were played but d came more original...just not hard hitting. Water/flow is hella played and so are "heavy/lightweight" lines

but overall Stanza won this because he had a couple decent punches at the end and i didnt feel D had anything to compete with them

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Voted For: Stanza

Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate
Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight”
^^ok opener...........
He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits
But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it
^^nah, weak, no punch
Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words
I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered
^^??....doesnt make sense........
Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame
Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game
^^weak punch............
Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone
I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run*

^^ok but not a good closer
overall your drop was simple, work on using some wordplay n gettin more complex, also try n use some nameplays for personals.........
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Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick
you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT
^^nah, bad opener
Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin
D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain
^^good use of his name, the punch was good
Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast
so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask
^^decent concept, ok punch
This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting
D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting
^^boarderline glorification
feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back
The lost is to bad jus leave
.bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back"
^^nah, weak closer
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overall im gonna go with stanza, he had one punch that connected but both of you hafta up your verses content
try using wordplay n more metas n personal.........
a rather weak battle

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Thanx Mayne ................I Wish I Could RTF But You Have a Battle With Someone in my crew so I Cant vote in that But Thanx for the vote