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05-06-05, 12:23 AM | #31 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
still humpin for feedback on this bizatch!!!!
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05-06-05, 12:28 AM | #32 | |||||||
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Hahahaha, this is a dope Open Mic....thanks for mentioning me... I don't know if I would mix any Ja Rule, but it's all good...
Nice drop, good flow, very entertaining, fun to read...keep it up... |
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05-06-05, 09:36 AM | #33 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
feedback hoez..........before i bitch slap ya biz-ass!!!!
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05-06-05, 03:16 PM | #34 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Ha this was a dope drop...
I Was realyl feelin it ... Nice creativity Some dope punchlines... You had nice structure .. i see you tried a new font Looks pretty cool... Hhaha about newb bashing. you had some nice personals , some bars were just fillers this was a dope drop.. nice creativity... nice imagery , and good wordplay, and vocab usuage overall keep it up
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