Voted For: GKillaz05

Blac-Out

ya shit was aight, had a decent flow, sort of a relaxed feel to it.....ya opener was fuckin weak man, the first line was just some shit talkin filler and the second part was not even a real punch, more like a statement.....and the closer was similar, ya just talkin about being all hard wit guns and ya gonna blast him, where is the punch, ya entire verse was all i'm hard, i got guns, ya shit, i'm gonna blast ya.......no real punches at all and you self-glorified more than once which makes it even wacker....ya need to actually have punches...once ya mastered that maybe you'll have sumthin worth reading......overall 3/10


GKillaz05

ya still a little rusty but ya shit was nice.....it flowed well and ya kept shit together so props for dat!!
the opener was weak though, you had some filler to begin with and that shit about grabbin the W is played like "WHOA".....ya closer was aight, a fairly decent personal but no need to explain shit ya know people don't like that.........overall ya verse was good....ya had some nice punches in between, vocabs was pretty basic but got good in some places....creativity - well i didnt see much really but still ya had more than enough to own this guy!!! overall 6/10

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