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| MarvJay1009 |
  
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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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05-21-05, 01:39 PM
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IP: 323F E2B9
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
One step--- haha ur shit was funny, specially that last line, good punches, flow was good, structure was too Marv--- your verse was decent, but one step just came harder with punches, flowed good, personals were ok, and structure was ight Punches-- One Step Flow-- Tie Personals-- One Step Structure-- Tie Wordplay-- Marv Multis-- Neither FInal VOte--- One step.... Rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showb...64&page=2&pp=15
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05-21-05, 06:28 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* —3 nope.. wack punch You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, —5 decent punch Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** —4 good persona, but weak punch overall – 12/30 onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth. dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self. —6.. good persona, punch was decent ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. —3.. played here, been used.. i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey. O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay. —5.. decent overall – 14/30 winner – even though this battle was pretty weak here, MaRVJay took this one.. his punches just were way harder.. the flow his was nice & he had some good personas up in there.. but no hate here ..1
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05-21-05, 08:48 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7402 AF51
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
OSB: Your punches were not the best, but by far, not the worst. They hit decently and you had some nice personals in there. Structure was kinda gay, but that doesnt really matter to me...I am basing this vote on your punches and personals Marvjay1009 You fell off ALOT in this verse. I feel that you underestimated your opponent, and it caught up to you. Punches were weak, and mama jokes are played, I dont give a fuck what you say, they are!! Personals were ok, but not the best. Therefore, I am giving this vote to OSB for being consistent with punches and personals that overall hit harder than yours anyways v/ OSB
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05-21-05, 08:49 PM
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IP: A7AC EBEC
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
aiiightttttttttt.... MARV - onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth. dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self. ^^^^ nice personal... ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. ^^^ nice punch, had me laughin.. i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey. O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay. ^^ nice closer ... 8/10 OSB - Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* ^^ pretty weak opener.. stretched... You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, ^^ Aiight nothin special... Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** ^^ weak as fuck... 5.5/10 vote MARV
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05-22-05, 12:24 AM
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IP: 13A4 AD49
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth. dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self. o.k, Im not even gonna follow, the link, I see what you sayin, and I'll assume he owned himself, decent personal. ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. This was played out, setup was fillerish, you could have packed it with something that would have increased the punches effectiveness, average bar. i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey. O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay. first line... check your grammar, cuz im just think not fam, is missing some words, Im not gonna play fill in the blanks, punch was pretty good, nothing spectacular but effective. 6.5/10 Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* lol, this was a clever punch, I liked the wordplay- flowed well, im not sure bout the setup line though. You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, lol this was pretty good, setup is o.k, the punch was decent- so far rhyme scheme as well. Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** ROFLMAO- lol, that did it. great closer. 8/10 I just think that OneStepBeyond was more consistent, he had a great closer, where I liked Marv's closer but it was the only bar I really liked in his verse, and OneStepBeyond was more consistent. Vote OneStepBeyond.
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05-22-05, 02:10 AM
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IP: 3B27 2020
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Ain't even try... ^^^^^^^ reason u lost this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-22-05, 02:05 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn...yo fagget u ahve 3 votes dont go back runnin 2 strobe
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05-23-05, 08:01 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 5941 B316
uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnn
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05-24-05, 02:16 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Nice battle here... Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* ORIGINAL CONCEPT, NICE OPENER You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, PRETTY NICE PUNCH Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** I KNOW YOU USED A PLAYED CONCEPT ON PURPOUSE...BUT SEEMS TO BACKFIRE AS IT WAS A WASTED BAR REALLY. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nice battle here... Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* ORIGINAL CONCEPT, NICE OPENER You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, PRETTY NICE PUNCH Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** I KNOW YOU USED A PLAYED CONCEPT ON PURPOUSE...BUT SEEMS TO BACKFIRE AS IT WAS A WASTED BAR REALLY. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth. dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self. NICE OPENER N PERSONAL. ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. NICE NAMEPLAY AND PUNCH HERE... i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey. O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay. DONT GET THE 1ST LINE BUT AGAIN GOOD PUNCH ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ MARV GETS THIS DUE TO THE FACT HIS PUNCHES N' PERSONALS WERE MORE CONSISTANT AND HIT HARDER. OSB YOUR WAS GOOD BUT WASNT FEELIN THE CONCEPT FOR YOUR LAST BAR.. NO HATE. RTF IN SIG.
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