Voted For: R-Rated

R-Rated:

Good verse here man...Emotion was really good, really nice use of vocabulary, and GREAT imagery...You did a real nice job on the topic, explained it well an shit...

"Welcome To The Gates of Perpetual Truth Where Forever Your Life Will Change..
Where You'll Realize Your All Puppets On Strings Performing Life On A Stage.."

^^ Favorite Line in your verse man real nice job. Everything also flowed real nice.

Pen N' Paper:

Good verse from you as well man...You had nice emotion, decent use of vocab, and good imagery...However, I feel that you could've upped you emotion a little bit as well as your use of vocabulary...Everything else was good man, but I just wasn't feeling it as much as R-Rated's verse man...Yours wasnt that interesting and didn't make me wanna keep reading.

V/ R-Rated

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