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SPuL aka Reckless 5 55.56%
1ndeph 4 44.44%
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Old 06-28-05, 12:04 PM   #31
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Voted For: 1ndeph



Here We Go:

Spulster:

He got you dawg. I mean, you had a good verse and all, but I didn't feel you came strong enough. Punches were there, most were creative and hit, and I'll admit, I laughed for five minutes at the "you nose is thhhhiiiiiiiiisssssssssss wide" LMFAO. But you didn't have as much...whats the word...I dont know, but I feel you couldve cam stronger bro.

1ndeph:

Real solid verse from you...Punches were creative, you were consistent, and you had alot of funny ass personals, for example, the myspace one. Your closer was very creative as well. I wasnt really feeling the dave chapelle metaphors, because the seemed more like a filler than a punch, so that was probably the only homosexual part of your verse. Other than that, solid drops by bpth, but 1ndeph took this.

V/ Indeph
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Old 06-28-05, 12:13 PM   #32
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

ok lets see:

SPuL:
Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D

v.s

Indeph:
Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace
.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase


OVerall:
This was an average battle. Y'all both had some good lines, but you also both had some wack as hell lines. Like made me think why the hell you put that in? Y'all both made me laugh too. spul had that nose line, and your lil bro line. haha both were tight lines. Both your flows and structures were pretty nice though. But I think spul just hit a little harder than you deph. Overall, shit was pretty close. good job by both

v/spul

oh, and rtf on my battle or I will get this vote removed.
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Old 06-28-05, 02:25 PM   #33
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Aiite really good battle let me break it down:

Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
^^^
Good opener, I felt the punch did not hit atall hard but it was a clever opening, 3/5

April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
^^^
Again not very hard hitting, but decent wordplay, 3/5

1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
^^^^
Good line, well done here..4/5

.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
^^^
Wasnt feelin this line atall sorry but, 1/5

if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
^^^
Good wordplay again BUT NOT HITTIN HARD.....2/5

Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
^^^
OK finally a good punch, 3/5, it wasnt too special

16/30

Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
^^
haha, good wordplay, but it did not hit hard like some of indeph's lines, 3/5

Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
^^
HIT HARD....HAHA..sickest line, good shit...5/5

You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
^^^
Haha, again hitting hard, good shit not as good as the one above, but still good..4/5

Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
^^
Didnt hit hard, but good wordplay, 2/5

Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
^^^
Haha, the diarreah and constepation bit was a sign of sick rhyming....4/5

Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D
^^
FUCK U, LOL, chicago the best, but neways good punch, but jus wait next season when we make the kings look like peasants.....3/5

21/30

Overall:

I think Spul won, because his punches hit harder, well played both of you.....RTF to my battle with daubs please
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