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Voted For: Ambid

you cant play me chump, you just shaking hands w/ doom.
i mean you thought homo, when i said i was gonna beat-on-you!
^^^weak.....4/10
you aint raw, when my flow connects you'll dissolve to shit.
an' my punches will have ya seeing stars so i guess you could say i put your asterisk!*
^^good wordplay......6/10
dont be optimistic b, your a waist so i'ma just strangle you witha belt.
you nothing man, coz like an' inside joke yo, you just kidding yourself.
^^good......6/10
so make do like a spanish foster, and simply adopt the "el".
an' just swallow this slug hoe, fore you get pumelled by shells.
^^set-up was nice...punch itself sucked ass...4/10
Ok..good verse.Had some good wordplay in the middle bars.But the 1st and last bars lacked.Work on your set-ups and such.Try to use personals too.All your bars were generic....and could be directed towards anyone.So..use personals.And try to upp ya flow up a bit.

Ill give a sweet tooth with this punch and ill take the cake and make you RE-treat
Your second rate and ur losses are like mike jones rhymes they just seem to repeat
^^Mike Jones lines with the repeating is played out now...3./10
Please tell me that your not trying to get a deal cause your chances are no good
Cause admib got a lesser chance of getting signed than a retards yearbook
^^bad....uncreative too....2/10
Im suplying the crack while reminding the whole Rv that admin is tryin to put on an act
Its a matter of fact that the only time i failed at something was when i tried to be wack
^^self glorifing...not a punch....1/10
Your gonna idol the man cause im a life taker and murdering to me is a bad habbit
Cuz Im gonna need three rolls of toilet paper after im done shitting on this faggot
^^Not much of a punch...1/10

Ok..all your lines were either played...or not a punch at all.From the minute still tippin was released...that repeating line from mike jones got played.The 2nd bar was uncreative and weak.Not signed like retard yrbooks?..Nah..The 3rd and 4th bars were not punches.You ain;t whack and you gonna shit on him...self glorifing right there.

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