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one mic 5 83.33%
HoTgIrL06 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 07-16-05, 09:52 PM   #31
To.DA.T
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Voted For: one mic

Are you tryna battle me cause u know i'm a girl?
If so, you gonna get burnt as if yo black ass waz toastin in hell.
^^^no.....worded terribly and just whack
U betta bring yo A game, even though I am a rookie.
Wen I get thru beatin u, Imma be yo friend, n make u a cookie.
^^^^Again...worded bad,basic,and just whack
I bet ur momma left u, cause u were so fuckin ugly.
U prolly went around sayin, "Are u my mother?" lyke da ugly duckling.
^^^NO....basic and stupuid concept
Imma expert in tha rap game, my flows flow swiftly.
I'll shoot u in da mouth, n have u talkin like Fifty.
^^^stupuid...not one punch trowned yet either
U a stupid ass dude, damn u stupid as a bitch.
Imma help u out myself, n get u HOOKED ON PHONICS.
^^^Basic.........
Aint no shame in my game, cause i know, i know how 2 rhymn.
So unlike you I put my hand on my keyboard, n type my lines in no time.
^^^^NO....
Have u ever watched Freddy Krueger, if not u should.
Cause he favors u, I think he yo long lost brother from the hood.
^^^NO.....not one punch in it
Not one punch in your verse.You were talking about beatin him up or some bullshit like dat.Ur lines were basic and whack.You had no wordplay or metaphors.U had nothing here.

yo, uh, this hoe's Jumpin at a chance to get an easy win/
it wont happen now, have to wait until we meet again/
^^^no....suks like hell
your lyrics are full of played punches and normal gunplay/
never takin off, like you was stuck on a runway/
^^suks..but first line...she had normal gunplay lines...but she got NO punches
my tongue spray, cant you see, we dont match, i roll with heat and thunder/
cant get a man with your looks, so you're after stevie wonder/
^^^NO....basic
why you even on this site? you obviously wack fam/
when it comes to "swallowin", this bitch does it faster than pac-man/
^^Lmao....best line and only punch

Well...you atuoumatically won for actually throwing a punch.That girl had none.U had a lot of basic shit in your verse.It's all about werdplay and metas.

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