A: yes, this is why RV is the toiler of rap boards.
B: they go all 'wanna-be superior" because they have no actual power over their real life, so they want power of your net life. Specially here on RV.

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word, and it this cats doin this to elevate... thats why people go to this site, not for cock bangers to think they're better than them.

and the line is decent because u used wordplay correctly but its not so good just because it wasn't good... i mean it wasn't very creative or hard hitting and didn't make complete sense.... good idea askin for advice from others though, i think more threads like this should exist

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its a lot simple like my punches, i'd say 6/10 its affective but it depends if you got a personal for the first line

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I get it but its an old concept.

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Daubs MySpace

its awfull.... forced as fuck dooms put it best to u.. dont force lines just put em blunt n straight to da point it works more effectively

thanks again people. i realize its not the best punchline ever, but i knew it made sense. thats why i got so frustrated when that Gongshow person voted against me because he said that line made no sense, along with the rest of my verse. he actually suggested for me to start this thread... thanks agian people

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Battalion For Life
Washington Heights Forever

yea man u made sense but like it didnt rhyme thats all........it was good

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it wasnt an exact rhyme, but it had that strong vowel sound to go with music.
yeah, you right, it dont really rhyme lol. but thats what happens with off the tops sometimes.

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Battalion For Life
Washington Heights Forever

yea i unda stand yea thats tru and yo do u want that battle to be 3-0 k.o. or do u want to go all 5 dammit.....lol

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all 5, cause i never heard of that 3-0 thing. plus i gotta feeling that aint no one gonna vote on mine till the end, cause thats how its looking

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Battalion For Life
Washington Heights Forever

of course u havent hurr it u a

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i think its wack?!?!?

it doesnt make complete sense..

hmm. well, ive heard enough. i appreciate those who use there brain and posted real feedback, and feel bad for the preppys who love this site. i really wish ya would stop associating yourselves with hip hop. your the reason people like dr. phil and bill o riely talk shit on rap. as far as those half cocked opinions, keep em. i really would rather you stay looking stupid and be genuine than to see you switch it up on yourselves and assimilate yet another aspect of hip hop culture; knowledge. you prolly wont see me on this site because like alot of other people, imma really find something better to do, seeing as how like only 10% of you do anything for this site. feel free to talk more shit, god knows logic wont stop you...

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Battalion For Life
Washington Heights Forever

it makes sense

but frankly i dont give a fuck anyway

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