Voted For: ~B~

U aint 'james bond' you're more like 'pussy galore'*
cuz 007 gets ho's but ur just about to get whored!
- Meh Weak Punch. But its a Punch, but its weak

After I giv u another 'L', ur confidence will be stirred,
unlike 007's martini, u gon be 'shaken & scared!'
- Could've word it better, but weak Punch.

u had 16 battles and only managed 2 win '6'**
changed ur name 2 'one mic' but u still suck dick!
-I like this bar good personal and a punch.

ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex!***
- Decent Punch.

Called u out a million times b4 but u always ducked****
must be a virgin they way u were scared 2 get (lyrically) fucked!
-Meh Good Punch.

one mic such a 'herb' that he belongs in a kitchen!
u havta be transgendered cuz ur a cock and a chicken!*****
- Meh...Weak Punch.

I'm above u, u cant touch this, ur a lyrical midget
If i personify skill with a girl then u'd be a fridget!******
-1st Line Played out making the 2nd line (Punchline) More weak...Ok closure

Overall- This was an balance on and off verse here. You started off with Weak Punches then ending up Having decent Punches...Then you started to go down again. It was an ok verse, I just elevate on wording your Lines more better. You explaing your Lines after you posted your verse is a herb move. Next Time make your Lines More Complex..Chea.


you joined several months after me, and you got double my posts
but you still no challenge to me at all, this battle must be a hoax
- Weak Punch

think you got skillz???, prove it by spittin rampant bars
but you cant, so imma flip this hoe like the guy in her avatar
- Weak Punch with a personal.

im too hot for you, why did sixth sense send me to battle you??
imma switch dre's quote, "you know what (~B~), i dont like your attitude"
- Ha Good Concept but weak Punch.

quit rap, go into the porn industry, and focus on sex*
cuz people are only gonna respect you if they know that you're blessed
-Meh 1st Line was Ok..But 2nd Line was weak...bleh.


bitch, you nutin to me, all your writtens are weak
you the "First Lady Of illness", what literally???
- Meh Word it a bit better. Weak Punch.


for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me
this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease
- Alright You got a Punch...Finally Ok closure.

Overall- This verse here was a Weak One. You had weak Punches then at the closure you had something good. Meh Elevate on better Punches, and wording it Much better.


Conclusion- My vote goes to B. B had some Punches (Effective) But it was Weak though. But B had 2 bars better than One Mic whole verse..One Mic your Punches were weak Period. You need to elevate on wording and making your Punches more effective. It was so basic...So my vote goes to "B"

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