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Daubs 5 100.00%
Macreep 0 0%
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Old 08-01-05, 06:00 PM   #31
PrahJect
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Voted For: Daubs

Ok lets breaK it down:

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
^^^
This was a hot line the wordplay and the creativity was really good....5/5

crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
^^^^
Not too great I saw what you were gettin at but it wasnt great 2/5

leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
^^^
Funny line (1st) but 2nd wasnt too great.....4/5

deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
^^^good try but wheres the punch....1/5 sorry

cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
*HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left
^^^
Ok decent I see the punch not too hard

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Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
^
HAHAHAHA THIS WAS SO CREATIVE....brilliant use....5/5

Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
^^
Sorry but the first line I didnt like its too played seemd like a filler but the second was decent but also seen that shit...2/5

Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
^^
This was good....kinda self gory but good wordplay and use...3/5

You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
^^^
I like this line liked the creativity and wordplay...4/5

Macreep: Ok stuff, Ive seen much better....keep up
Daubs: Nice shit there dawg....you got it hard...nice battle between us btw

Daubs gets this...RTF on my battle with Lawless or this vote will be removed

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Old 08-01-05, 06:02 PM   #32
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safe mate,

ima hit it up in a bit.






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Old 08-01-05, 08:11 PM   #33
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..............................bump................ ...............
 
Old 08-02-05, 01:18 PM   #34
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uppin............................................. ...
 
Old 08-02-05, 04:41 PM   #35
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uppin............................................. ..........
 
Old 08-02-05, 06:42 PM   #36
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Voted For: Daubs

Flow-Daubs,both had a nice flow..but Daubs just edged him out a bit.

Punches-Now..this was a tough choice.I think Macreep's play off personals in every bar was nice.But daubs was just more creative and such.Had more metas and wordplay

Personals-Clearly Macreep....had one in every bar.I like that a lot.

Multis-Like personals...Macreep had a multi in every bar
shake the road/take the load..cigarette crook...alphabeth book....mother's foam....another's throne....glass circle....surpass Urkel....

I think Macreep can be something special with a little more pack in his punch.

Originality-Clearly Daubs...it loooked like Macreep spent more time gathering personals than making the punch.

Vote-Daubs...close battle
 
Old 08-02-05, 06:49 PM   #37
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Ite thanks for the feedback, will keep it in mind.

up.................
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Old 08-04-05, 09:48 AM   #38
Payn
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Voted For: Daubs

Good battle..i liked this alot....

Battle Breakdown=

Mutlis= Daubs
Punches- very closed..but votin on "Daubs"
Personals- MaCrep
Metas= Daubs
Vocab- Daubs
Complexity- Daubs
structure- MaCrep

this battle was every close in my perspective...but I feel like Daubs came just a little harder...cuz he went all out on his verse
and the Whole lazy court cases afta diz u'll b sue-is-idol worked for his advantage....

Vote= Daubs

peace...oh yeah rtf in diz battle here

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Old 08-04-05, 01:39 PM   #39
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^^tell me one multi he had????...........................................
 
Old 08-04-05, 01:41 PM   #40
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fryin peers...pioneers

meh..

I took this anyway man.
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Old 08-04-05, 02:16 PM   #41
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: Daubs

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
^^^No this was forced an punch wasnt effective
crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
^^^this was good...
leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
^^^THis was ight....
deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
^^^Played urkel that was weak....

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
^^^Good Opener Solid punch
Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
^^^Ight Punch nuthin to special
Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
^^^this was a Good Punch wordplay good
You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
^^^Hot Closer i liked that one...

This was an good battle both came wit some good punchs personals an good structure.....but Daubs came wit a stronger verse he consistently dissed macreep wit punchs that werent played.....V/Daubs
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