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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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08-06-05, 10:39 PM
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damn please vote i see yall peepin this just lay a explained vote down mayne
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08-08-05, 01:22 AM
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aight yakll shit its 2 mo posts and its done i no yall tired of seein this so just explain ur vote and post please
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08-08-05, 03:03 AM
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upppppppppppppim for votes ........................
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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08-08-05, 03:08 AM
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Voted For: flow verse
the wordplay was simple but very hard hitting .......... i enjoyed your verses thought they were really funny....... structure needs work tho .................like the personal in the opener ...........Defined had a good drop too ................ but my vote goes to flow..... nice drop man ......good luck to both..keep writing
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08-08-05, 04:18 PM
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upppppppppppppppppppppping for votes......................
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-08-05, 11:00 PM
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uppppppppping for votesssssssssssss..................
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-10-05, 12:16 AM
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uupppppppppppppppping ......................................
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-10-05, 02:12 PM
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Voted For: flow verse
Structure-Defined ur structure was far better than flow verse had a better flow.Flow verse try and get all ur lines to match up at the end....makes it look neater!> Vocab-Niether had any vocab to be reconized for i suggest you both up on vocab, as ur verse goes on u have to enhance ur vocab iight?....up on that yo Personals-Flow verse had better personals by far....had good fresh personals that were hott.Defined, ur verse lacked good personals thta caught my eye....didnt feel them at all up on that and try to get ur personals noticed iight? Punches-Flow verse had fresh hott punches that hit hard my friend. "He thinks he’s funny? . . . yea like jokers in a deck of cards . . .just throw them out He can’t spit unless you mean the cum dripping out his mouth"=best line funny as hell! Defined didnt really see any hott disses, make sure u diss ur opponent, no hate though... Originality-Flow verse had better fresh lines that were appealing and iight to read, although defined had better flow it didnt seem as fresh and hard hitting. Multis-Defined had fresh hott multis on his verse, made it flow better fa sho!...Flow verse up on multis it will make ur verse more enjoyable to read iight! V/FLow verse RTF please since i took the time to peep urs...its in my sig yo |
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08-10-05, 02:17 PM
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by the way no hate in my analyization, just stating honest feed,
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08-10-05, 07:48 PM
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uppppppppppppppppppping for votes...............................
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-11-05, 05:29 PM
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uppppppppppppping for votes............................................. ....
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-11-05, 08:16 PM
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
IP:
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-11-05, 08:17 PM
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
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i agree wit El Eye.........................................
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08-11-05, 08:48 PM
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppping the batt;e
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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08-12-05, 08:11 PM
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upppping for votes.........................................
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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