Voted For: Deranged

Deranged
You Had A More Better Verse Here Man..Punches Was Great..Personals Cool..Wordplay Was Nice Man For Real

Inspiration
Meh First Bar Was Pretty Decent The Rest Wasn't Good Enough Man Keep It Up Though

Vote-Deranged

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Voted For: Inspiration

AIGHT DawgG is this the battle u told me to vote for u on if its not sorry ima vote for the 1 u asked .

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We are GANKSTA's

Voted For: Deranged

~This is an L*F*S* Review-

This shit was easy.

Inspiration

battlin this cat on- pc rippin "quality" into quantities
look at this Soft -Femcee watch as he dons-Tities

Wack...and didn't make sense

just call me out and i bust-raw no "trust invovled”
feedin him medecine pills till his guts-dissolve

Decent

This guy disses women, sayin' they bad, he got no flavor
So when a guy D/r's him, it's no wonder he'll return the favor

Pretty good

Sit down an take some elevation tips from the voters b,
You a pussy like when I talk beef you don’t talk back you just block me,

What?

You all around soft losing 99% of ya battles homie,
Your rhymes ar ghost writed both you an ya mans phony,

[/b]Huh?[/b]

An I aint saying that to be saying it, He aint ever write one damn thang
An unlike Bitches homie, In this batle im out of ya range.

Wack AND played.

Deranged

the tape's in effect..his dreams of recordin's stuck..it ain't happenin
cuz his pause/paws are tied..no wonder this rookie ain't clappin

Decent

he done shooked me from rappin.....he sucks be-on(beyond) us all
explains why his past is sticky...and i ain't just talkin about his night calls

Clever

better get the pine-sol..cuz we all know inspiration's about to spit
and his shit stain(stayin) on the screen like baby diapers to shit

Decent

accepted my call-out all hyper and shit cuz you bit...don't lie bitch
kinda like a transparent mask on..cuz u ain't gon diss-guys wit it

Good.

i'll break ur spine with no toll...and u be swingin from the vines n poles
& there hasn't even been one vote..yet you already behind the polls

Nice.

i'll break ur limps and joints so bad your brain'd forget how to even rise
& ur shit's wasted/waisted so much... this contest wasn't even tied/thigh

Dcent close.

OVERALL: This was Deranged easy. We all can see that. He had better punches, better wordplay, better eveything. Period.

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thx....uppin for more votes.......................

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checkin polllllzzzzzzzzz homiez.......................

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uppin for fuckin votes............................

Voted For: Deranged

v/deranged

simply becuz his punches were far more hard hitting than his opponent its obviuos to see his structure is better but together and flowed better...i was feeling deranged personals more......inspiration

You all around soft losing 99% of ya battles homie,
Your rhymes ar ghost writed both you an ya mans phony,

^those kinda lines are played you have to be creative with them....

so v/deranged

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Voted For: Deranged

V/ deranged for not biting...

inspiration bit "This guy disses women, sayin' they bad, he got no flavor
So when a guy D/r's him, it's no wonder he'll return the favor"
from
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206655
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...166&postcount=4