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Oreo 2 28.57%
Daubs 5 71.43%
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Old 10-12-05, 11:05 AM   #1
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Voted For: oreo

Daubs:

Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
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^^weak opener 3/10
Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
^^ehh 4/10
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
^^decent 5/10
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
^^ok 4/10
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
^^good bar ok meta 6/10
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
^^ehh 4/10
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
^^blah 3/10
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
^^ok 4/10
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
^^ok 5/10
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He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied
^^ok 4/10

Overall: 42/100 (42%)


Oreo:

oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
^^played concept ok opener 4/10
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
^^good meta nice punch 6/10
i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
^^ok 4/10
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
^^kinda gay 3/10
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
^^ok 4/10

Overall: 21/50 (42%)

Daubs came alright here but he has alot of just ok bars but Oreo won this with more witty meta's cuz basically no one threw any punches.

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Old 10-12-05, 11:53 PM   #2
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thanks any battles or songs yall need feed or votes on?......
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Old 10-13-05, 02:51 PM   #3
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thanks any battles or songs yall need feed or votes on?......



Yea...I got a bunch of battles in my sig that could use some votes.
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Old 10-13-05, 02:05 PM   #4
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Overall: 21/50 (42%)

Overall: 42/100 (42%)

wow...
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Old 10-13-05, 03:20 PM   #5
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oreos not that active so ill rtf later i nabout an hour thanks for dropping honest votes
you chould vote on the givne light vs mentalz battle that has no votes lol
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Old 10-14-05, 12:10 AM   #6
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what you mean i aint active... im the vampire of r.v. only on when the sun goes down
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Old 10-14-05, 09:16 AM   #7
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Voted For: Daubs

Oreo - Good spit it flowed very well, and you had strong punches.

Best Line - oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart

Worst Line - you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players

Daubs - Good diss, flowed well had some good wordplay, and hard punches.

Best Line - Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's

Worst Line - Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands

OVERALL - This was a good battle, I think Daubs had the better wordplay, and his punches were hitten harder. Oreo you should have tried more creative punches, and threw some wordplay in there.

Vote - Daubs

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Old 10-14-05, 10:38 AM   #8
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safe up...........................................
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Old 10-14-05, 11:27 AM   #9
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what kinda shit....ummm uppin..................................
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Old 10-14-05, 08:17 PM   #10
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Old 10-15-05, 01:08 PM   #11
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Voted For: Daubs

vote-daubs

overall-this was kinda one-sided

oreo best:
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart

but that was still weak...just pick different concepts and try to be consistant with your punches n personals and not much on flow.

Daubs best:
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied

those were my favorite out of your verse the rest were kinda blah to me....you were more about punches and not flow and personals.

Oreo-had flow
Daubs-punches

none had personals...punches overthrow flow in battles

no hate...just elevate a bit oreo and pick better concepts and throw more punches and add personals.good battle.~1~
 
Old 10-15-05, 01:10 PM   #12
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thanks for the vote............

up...........................
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Old 10-16-05, 12:08 PM   #13
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Old 10-16-05, 12:59 PM   #14
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Voted For: Daubs

Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume

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you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players


[B]this was weak, the main point in deciding who won is the line limits, daubs put more into his verse, whereas oreo just went basic and only managed one decent bar. daubs had a few, that opener was cool, i get it cuz i still have my UK accent.....the t'cook-E's line was funny, prolly ure best one and the one about reducing the volume, that shit made me laugh...overal both came weak but daubs had a longer verse, more better bars and he was more consistent, but both need to do better in the future.

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Old 10-16-05, 03:51 PM   #15
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Voted For: Daubs

Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
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Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume

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couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart


oreo some of your concepts were kinda played, others were worded worng
daubs really took this without too much trying

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