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Voted For: Natural killa

Theory

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Naw wasnt feelin this...........
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
MEH.....ok
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
MEH
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
LMFAO.....NOOO

Overall.....5/10

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Natural

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
MEH....ok...coulda worded better
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
Aight....
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
Ha...aight
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
Aight....decent

Overall....7/10

v/natural for a better overall verse....theory work on better and more direct punches....also work on your wordplay as well as wording

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Voted For: Theory

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
the concept is newbish and played, delivery is weak..
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
rhymin was meh, and his name ain't fuckin "TEARY" its "THEORY" they are 2 completely different words..
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
falling off, played concept and u know it..
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
finally, an ok punch..

muthafucka...u are battlin wack lately, the last like 3-4 battles i've seen of ures have been weak and inconsistent....you need to stop battling so much cuz its like ure draining ure punches. flow was aight, you had like one decent punch though and that wasn't all that great either, now start battling decent like i've seen you do or i won't vote on ure shit anymore, lol


Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
wordplay was meh, punch was meh..
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
[B}lol, decent wordplay here..[/B]
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
decent..ok flip on a fairly used concept..
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
punch was wack..wordplay was aight..

first battle i've seen of ure's, it was an average verse, the concepts you used in two bars at least were played, u put a nice flip on the one of them, ure wordplay was ure strongest factor, it was nice, forced in places, but it flowed nicely, punches were....ok. one point, from all the big talk you make saying everyone is wack, if ure battles are generally like this, then u need to elevate. NO HATE. just criticism, cuz this verse whilst not bad, it wasn't exactly dope either.

V/ - Theory

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Voted For: Theory

DAMN!!!!!! this was a good battle....... both of u had good punches and metas........ Theory had better wordplay........ too bad i was sorta lookin for somebody to take own him, but i've gotta say he took this one.....

vote: Theory........ u got this u conceited bastard.....

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Voted For: Theory

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

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I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

Despite having only 1 quotable, Theory took this with relative ease. His none quotables were quite creative and had some alright wordplay, if they lacked the punch to go with it. Nat on the other hand came pretty garbage with the exception on that one punch, hardly any creativity and his concepts were played and not hitting.

V/ Theory

Voted For: Theory

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

vs.

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

Laid Back says:
v/theory, he came with harder punches, his other 2, one was forced and one was a diss at a crew, not the oppenant, and NK, yours were either corny or didnt make sense/bad. Theory got it

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Voted For: Theory

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

All that was so fuckin creative, ill verse.

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i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position


one sided to fuck.

no hate, but he deof took this one.


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Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well

NICE WORDPLAY, IM FEELIN THE CONCEPT...WAS ORIGINAL.

Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck

PROLLY THE MOST CREATIVE BAR I EVER SEEN ON RV, ILL SHIT SERIOUSELY.

I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

NICE WORDPLAY..DECENT PUNCH

'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

AGAIN NICE WORDPLAY, KIND PLAYED BUT A NICE FLIP ON IT.


DOPE VERSE.

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i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle

NICE PERSONAL, SOLID OPENER

I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish

NA TEARY N THEORY MEH.

ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder

DECENT ATTEMPT BUT WASNT FEELIN THE WORDING

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

THIS WAS A DOPE PUNCH, DEFO YA BEST.

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THEORY PLAIN CAME MORE CREATIVE AND HARDER.

PROPER EXPLINATION.

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Voted For: Theory

word.............................................. .........

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so, upping........................................

checkin polls...i like the veggie lines that was dope

Voted For: Theory

>i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
played...3/10
>I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
hmm, if this was worded better, like a punch from a kids perspective, cause you pronounced theory incorrectly...3/10
>ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
eh, nothing special 5/10
>Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
solid, set up was gay 6/10

overall:16/40....word, uhh, thought a bunch of your punches could\ have been worded a little better, finisher was good, but didn't keep consistency throughout this battle

>Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
creative, good wordplay 6/10
>Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
liking that wordplay 7/10
>I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
cool, 6/10
>'m ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
haha, i laughed 7/10

overall:26/40...theory was more consistent, had creative punches with witty wordplay....his punches made me laugh as well, so he takes this one

v/theory

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