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12-10-05, 10:23 PM
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^lool @ "where ya bars at?" lmao
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12-10-05, 10:57 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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12-11-05, 01:48 AM
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*gets done listening to black magik - loving you...which only i can hear..considering i mixed it for him...and he loves me so he sends me his tracks that he doesnt post on soundclick....* ok enough of that listening to Creeping.... hook is dope...dude singning is ill....and beat is ill as well... "rapping my butt off".....uhh no dude....just no.... voice is cool....flow is pretty good.....but man...lyrics...you gotta work on that shit.....you use like 0 multies...no wordplay...metaphors...anything...just use some multies here and there or something.... i have always thought u had mad potential....cause...you gotta good voice..good flow ( but you DO have to make sure u dont screw up on it at all...if u mess up a lil bit....re record that shit...cause a couple spots on here..u screwed up)....your hooks are done well...pretty catchy....you have good song making ability...which you cannot say for a lot of internet heads....but dude...lyrically your killing me...just switch it up some and give me some multies here and there... delivery and presence are good....convincing....your flow falls off when u say rapping my butt off....which is the line that stands out in the track...and makes me not wannna listen to the rest of it....but i did....and its a pretty good track...minus that 1 wack ass line... but thing u gotta work on is those lyrics man.......just put some time into it...and work on that shit.... word
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12-11-05, 04:40 AM
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GG Haterz
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I have that song too. 
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12-11-05, 12:01 AM
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12-11-05, 01:54 AM
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LMAO @ just fucking her....good shit lol.. damn you gotta good voice for real...i like that...flow is nice...delivery is coo....you can up it a lil bit...but its no drastic changes u have to make... damnit...short ass tracks.....make fucking hooks...itll help...never do that shit...with the lil 1 verse thing...cause this is a pretty good track....but it pissed me off when it ended...cause it wasnt a full song...add a hook to that shit...and another verse or something.....like i told messenger...hooks can make a song...so make sure u work on them with every joint u do...itll help tremendously in the future... and you need a new mic...for real...u can be good as hell for real...but quality is ass.....if u had some nice quality sounding shit.....id prolly download a lot of your songs and put em on cd or something....but im not gonna put no computer mic shit on a cd...... so yea....basically u have all the right chemicals to be dope as shit....but i didnt get to see your hook making ability.......so im not sure about your song making skill.....but as far as putting a verse together....with a nice flow/delivery combo...u got it down...and got insane potential.... get a new mic...start putting together full songs.........
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12-11-05, 02:32 AM
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lol @ the irony of me no longer being able to record Thanks though pimpin.
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12-11-05, 12:06 AM
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yea man I'd like to know what you think...If you think I suck it's cool and all I just wanna know where I am at my level now. www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05 PEEP: Murder UNF Abuse I Know ft. Sib peep all of them and tell me.
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12-11-05, 12:08 AM
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If Ike listens to all those I honestly think he will die.
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12-11-05, 02:02 AM
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ok....im peeping UNF abuse....im not peeping more than 1 track at a time from someone...cause there are others who want feed too...and i also have shit to do.... first off...im biased towards this beat....i hate it.....so yea..... intro is ehhh... your delivery and quality has gotten better......BUT delivery i dont think is really right for a diss....i mean...its ok for what it is....but your not making it seem like a diss with the way you come across... again another short track from someone.........this could be whats holding heads on RV back with their song making ability....start making hooks with every song man....itll help.... some of the lyrics in this are coo...but nothing really stood out to me...and made me go "damn...nice".....i didnt like the 50 line...just seemed a bit wack and too basic to me......but other than that line....the lyrics were ok flow is ok...your on beat.....but its not real entertaining...like...it doesnt keep my attention on the track...its kinda the same way throught the whole song...switch it up a bit...and make it a bit catchy and entertaining for listeners... i will admit...you have gotten tons better in every catagory....but u still have to keep working hard to get where u need to be....and u got a ways to go....so PLEASE make a hook with every song u do...itll help in the future....work on switching flow up.....and work on a convincing delivery.... word
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12-11-05, 12:08 AM
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Thank You, Come Again
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Ike's an audio head? Alots changed
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12-11-05, 12:10 AM
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wow lmfao Ike is one of rv's top elevated and best.
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12-11-05, 02:03 AM
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lol damn...how long has it been since u been to RV?
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12-11-05, 01:50 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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^^ i suck at writing lyrics never been good sept for one song but woord thanks for the hellp yo
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12-11-05, 01:57 AM
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