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Old 03-08-06, 07:14 PM   #1
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Voted For: SlicKnife

this was a pretty even battle....pictureperfect had mad wordplay, but the punches were a little too gangster, and not personal enough...personals win battles, and even though your wordplay was slightly clever, it wasn't enough to outshine slick knifes personals....just about every line was a personal...and i like to see that shit, now slick knife, you DID have personals..how ever...i felt like some of your punchlines were forced...and they didn't connect too hard, but maybe you didn't feel like you need to connect.....anyways..my vote goes to slicknife
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Old 03-09-06, 04:30 PM   #2
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Thanks for votin on this old battle man

Uppin for more.............................................. ...........
 
Old 03-09-06, 04:59 PM   #3
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picture perfect....

nice wordplay in the first 2 lines... but unfortunately that's all ya had going for you.... almost every other word was "shit"... got adjectives?...nouns?... synonyms?....damn.... i mean.... the pampers line was straight amateur...punches didn't connect at all.... set-ups were suspect... shoulda kept it on the same level of wordplay as the first two lines

Slick....

punches were definitely setup better... not the best punches but still set up better overall...

Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!

set up was cool^^^ but that second line is stretched all to hell... i tried to recite in time and found i couldn't do it without stretching the line.... it's not about just making it rhyme... shyt's still gotta fit to some kinda rhythm

I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!

you fucked up ya closer badly.... the setup was perfect and the idea in the last line was there... then i saw this:

IS HE FUCK!..... huh?...it don't even make sense!!! you edged him out by very little and that's only cuz ya lines were set up better... keep at it though... it's all love....

btw... i don't even do text no more... i'm audio only... just helping the text kats out by getting them votes in there
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Old 03-10-06, 06:37 AM   #4
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shits wacks...........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Old 03-10-06, 09:19 AM   #5
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easy win slick
your opener set him up to go down........
Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge

open:slick
punches:slick had better ones
personals:
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!
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Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
so again personals:u tell me.......slick
closeric tried but slicks hit harder

this battle was one sided
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